Dear Editor, I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we've had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. 40 percent of the students think the public should pay an entrance fee for parks,but the price shouldn't be very high.Parks,in their opinion ,need much money to pay gardeners'wage and to buy various kinds of new plants.Oppositely,60 percent of the students think against them.Park,as all may know,is the place where they can relax themselves.If an entrance fee were to be charged for parks,,parks would have to built some walls and gates.It would have an bad influence on the impression of the city to others. If they were to continue to do that ,they would pay high price. Yours truly, Li Hua

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