高考英语作文临考指导 （五）作文题目看图作文 大学新生报到，家长挤爆校园 （“走向成功”的徐汇区）写作思路第一段： 描述漫画的内容。（描述完后应该提出自己的中心观点）第二， 三段：对此现象加以评述 （根据你的中心论点，来分论）第四段. 升华主题, 呼吁社会.

学生习作 (A)From the picture, we can see lots of people pouring into the university they have just been admitted into. Following them were their parents carrying heavy luggage for them. Obviously, it will do students much harm rather than bring them convenience.It is widely accepted in China that most students are good at scoring high marks. But when it comes to solving practical problems, they will probably stop there with a sigh. The idea that it is helpful to take up all the things for children in order to provide their children with more time to study is nothing but stupid.The society we live in today is more and more competitive and needs ability more than high marks at some aspects. Besides studying hard, we should learn to care more about the slightest details of life such as finding classrooms and paying fees on our own.I strongly appeal to all the parents that they should loosen their hand, and thus their children can spread their wings and fly up high in the sky. (B)As the new term is coming, new university students are constantly entering the new schools. Unfortunately, in the picture, we see the student walking ahead with an admission, followed by several relatives carrying heavy luggage.I think this is a serious problem which needs discussion. First, it’s not wise for parents to bring up the children, and therefore, learning to care about the parents as soon as possible is what a mature student ought to do.Last but not least, people with high marks but poor abilities are not what our society calls for. What our society needs are people who are rich in practical experience and competitive abilities, so that those who always depend on their parents will finally be beaten when they step into society.I sincerely hope that new university students can walk into the university camps with a confident smile rather than the accompany of parents. (C)From the picture, we can see many parents carrying different kinds of things such as suitcases, computers going to the university. And this is a vivid reflection of today’s university. In my opinion, parents don’t need to be so positive at all.To begin with, university students are older enough to take care of themselves. They know how to arrange things, how to enroll in the university and so on. And they also have their own way to carry their things to the university. So parents don’t need to worry about them.What’s more, parents should let students be independent. After entering the university, students have to live on campus and get along with others on their own. Students will have to survive in society independently sooner or later, so parents shouldn’t do everything for students.To conclude, students must be independent. And there s no need for parents to arrange everything for students.