高考英语临考作文指导(三)
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高考英语临考作文指导(三)作文题目你是学生会干部。发现许多学生倒掉学校午餐,到校外购买小吃,于是在同学中做了调查。然后以学生会主席王海的名义给校长写了一封信,分析原因并提出具体的建议。写作思路一.介绍背景:学生倒掉学校午餐而去校外购买小吃二.分析原因三.解决的办法或:一.介绍背景二.边分析原因边提出解决方案三.表达决心
2007年05月23日 04点05分 1
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书上范文Dear Principal,Recently we noticed that many students didn’t have their lunch in the dining-room. They just poured their food into the garbage and then went to buy some snacks at the nearby stands by the road. Afterwards, we made an investigation among all the student, and found that almost 70 percent of the students were complaining about the food our school provided.Lunch is very important for students’ health, so measures must be taken to prevent such things happening again. Our suggestion is that we have a regualr meeting every week, listening to their advice. At the same time we should let them know eating snacks for lunch does no good to them. They need to have a balanced diet as they grow up. Would you please let us know your decidion as soon as possible?Thank you for your consideration.Yours sincerely,Wang HaiChairman of the Students’ Union学生习作Respectful Principal,I’m Wang Hai, the chairman of the Students’ Union. Recently, I have found that many students in our school throw the school lunch away, but buy the snack outside the school. So I made a survey and here I’m writing to tell you about the results and my suggestions.According to the students, the primary reason is the quality of the lunch in school. After a half day’s hard work, they want to have a big lunch, which is both delicious and nutritious, but the fact is disappointing. I suggest that our school should have a talk with those who are in charge of our meals in school, and I hope they will accept the students’ proposals and work out a new menu.Another reason is the lack of economical awareness among students. They take evey grain of rice for granted and deal with the dish however they like. This will make a bad impact on our campus culture. So I suggest holding a lecture designed to let more students know the hardship behind every grain of rice and make them learn to value what they have now.I hope through our joint efforts, our school will more beautiful not only in terms of the surroundings but also in terms of the students’ behavior.Thank you for spending time reading my letter.Yours sincerely,Wang HaiDear Principal,I’m chairman of the Students’ Union. I’m writing to inform you of a bad phenomemon in our school.Recently many students buy snacks outside the school instead of having lunch in school. Some of them even throw away their lunch our school offers. After I have investigated it, the reasons and suggestions are as follows.First, the students lack a sense of saving food. As the living standard is rising, many students are becoming more and more luxurious. They care little about money, let alone the food. Thus, a campaign designed to raise the students’ moral standard should be launched.Another reason may be that the food in our school can’t live up to their expectation. We can’t deny the fact that the food in our school canteen is not so delicious. We may consider varying the menu in order to prevent the students from doing so.As we can see, both sides bear a portion of the responsibility for such a case. Would you please take it into your daily agenda?Yours sincerely,Wang Hai
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