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skytheripper 楼主
sayin' nothing,you left me along with no chance.kind as before,but the sweet was no more for my eyes.yet there had been the letters,with flame to dance.to whom?you would give your next promise.hallowed are the love,hallowed are the Jesus.extrmely still was I fond of you and your nice.remaining the memory,or remaining the sadness.illusion was it being still,and your face had been inside the darkness.plug for wonder?or plug in unconsciousness.play for fun?or play in regress.emotion could betray your true feelings.returning no day...not again,the last moment...I choose to keep my tears... 
2007年05月22日 17点05分 1
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你的第一行是alone不是along吧?斗胆尝试做个翻译: 无言之中,你将我孤零零地置于毫无机会的境况。一如既往的善良,可是再也无一丝甜蜜浮现在我的眼眶。曾经的那些信函,浸透着爱舞的火光。呈给谁?你将点燃你新的承诺的希望。神圣的耶稣,神圣的爱在徜徉。我自始至终犹为忠爱着你美丽的脸庞。它为我有时留下浅浅的回忆,有时又留下淡淡的忧伤。缥缈的幻觉一如往昔,你的容颜竟变得这般黯淡无光。阻塞了你的思绪,还是陷入了迷茫?博得了开心的果实,还是坠入了悔恨的海洋?有一天感情会背叛你真真正正的感伤。永远……永远无法回头,我最终抉择了依然眼泪千行……
2007年05月22日 18点05分 2
level 1
个人的努力,万望莫见笑
2007年05月22日 18点05分 3
level 7
skytheripper 楼主
确实似乎是alone...谢翻译,翻译得超水准……加精……
2007年05月22日 18点05分 4
level 1
得此赞美,喜不自胜
2007年05月22日 18点05分 5
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