【求助】英语好的亲们进
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茜有独钟 楼主
我们学校老师让我参加一个英语比赛,以“我为奥运做贡献”为题,写一篇稿子,亲们帮帮忙吧~~~小学六年级水平,稍微难一点也行。谢谢了!!
2007年05月22日 11点05分 1
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你应该找濯世,他那是绝对地道的北美英语.还有红蜘蛛829,专业人士.
2007年05月22日 11点05分 2
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你是小学6年级?知音呀!我也是六年级
2007年05月22日 11点05分 3
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茜有独钟 楼主
谢谢然儿,不过我哪里找她们去啊?我现在急着要,越快越好啊~~~
2007年05月22日 11点05分 4
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1楼和3楼的,我也是六年级的
2007年05月22日 11点05分 5
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茜有独钟 楼主
汗~~~谁帮我找篇稿子啊~~~
2007年05月22日 12点05分 6
level 0
I think I can do a lot for the olymipcs. Although China is improving but we can do more. I can tell the people around me to stop littering on the ground and also stop spitting on the ground. I am also proud to say that I know english because with the olmypics coming people need to learn some english. I think I can also teach the people around me some easy english. As for my self I will continue to study english and by the time the olymipcs come I hope my english willl have some big improvement.
2007年05月22日 12点05分 8
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茜有独钟 楼主
谢谢楼上的亲,不过是谁啊?
2007年05月22日 12点05分 9
level 0
Everybody knows Olmypic Games will be held in the next year in China. I believe all of us are excited about it. I know I am too normal and too young to perform something great. But I have enough enthusiasm to make any little contribution for it. For example,(now your thought...)......That's what I think. I know my deed is so little for the Olmypic Games. However, if everybody takes action, I know that will be a huge power. So, my friends, come on to make contributions to Olmypic.
2007年05月22日 16点05分 10
level 6
楼上的英文很不错了。不过我想你最好把你想说的中文留在上面,这样我们才好帮你翻译出来呀。
2007年05月22日 16点05分 11
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redspider829:你的意思是我括号里的那个吗?哦那个是留给楼主自己补充事例的空间的。我在学校打的字(没有中文输入,可恶!!!~~~),但是午休时间很短,来不及想事例了,所以留下空。亲们谁要是有好的什么事情可供做贡献的多提提,我这猪脑子比较懒,死也没想出做什么贡献好。5555555~~~~~搁过去看来该枪毙滴!!!~~~啪!!!!~~~~~~~~~......
2007年05月22日 19点05分 12
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in 2008, the olympic game will be held in Beijing, my hometown. every Beijinger is excited and so eager to contribute to the Game. i am no exception. though i am only a normal primary school student, who is too young to do great things, i still can make my own contribution to the olympic games. in order to show our hospitality, i will study English harder. so that i can use fluence English to introduce Beijing's culture and Beijing's developement to our foreign friends.and i work as a translator, helping them if they have communicational problem. if they need any help, i will be quite willing to help them, so that they can have a comfortable pleasant tome in Beijing.i can also be a volenteer in the Olympic Game. i will work hard and do the sevice work as well as i can. i will try be best to add my own power to olympic game.to show our civility, i will take action from now on and from small things such as queuing, saving water, throwing wastes to the garbage canamd keeping the street clean, etc. i will also try to persuade others to do like so and proppgate civility and Olympic. thus, when the foreign friends come, they can see a civil Beijing.All i can do are small things, but if everybody do those small things well and put our power together, then it will be a huge power.so take action from now, from small things in our daily life, we can all make contributions to the olympic.
2007年05月23日 03点05分 14
level 0
自己不喜欢写文章,就帮着看看吧~redspider829好像是学英语的吧,前辈啊~时间原因吧,有些"小错误",spelling mistake~the olympic games 复数fluent EnglishBeijing's culture and it's development避免重复i can work as a tranlator...pleasant time in Beijingvolunteertry my best to...and keeping the street clean. 不需要etc了we all can make....the olympics
2007年05月23日 09点05分 15
level 1
天!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
2007年05月23日 10点05分 16
level 5
Geish,她/他要的是小学六年级的水平。你们写的也太像大人的了。拜托。。。我是昨天第一个发表英文的就是192.86.106.* 。Gosh,if your gonna write someting than make it right! Hua?
2007年05月23日 13点05分 17
level 6
hehe,谢谢帮我改错,没有注意措辞,打错了很多。以后一定注意。至于是否大人,我似乎没什么感觉:(
2007年05月23日 14点05分 18
level 1
是有那么点像大人,都写到社会问题了
2007年05月24日 03点05分 19
level 8
这样的风气,不好!~虽然有帮忙的了,但,最好还是自己写~ 才真实~
2007年05月24日 04点05分 20
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茜有独钟 楼主
记住冰川的话了,不过这比赛老师说可以参考往上的文章,只要不全篇都下载就可以了。可以把几篇文章综合一下。谢谢几位亲们帮助,还好基本都能看懂~~~我会努力比赛的,谢谢大家的帮助!
2007年05月24日 10点05分 21
level 6
恩,冰川说的对~~~楼主借鉴没什么,记得不要通片抄才是好孩子。嘿嘿~~~~
2007年05月24日 19点05分 22
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