求助贴。请问哪里能找到一篇写的很烂的英语作文~
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优雅の疯 楼主
[囧] 太苦涩了~
2012年12月12日 04点12分 1
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沙发 五楼会知道吧
2012年12月12日 04点12分 2
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优雅の疯 楼主
= = 期末考试已经考完了,剩最后一个Project就可以过寒假啦~ [撒花]
我的Project选题是关于写作的,需要的素材是一篇有很多语法错误,言之无物,逻辑混乱的高中生英语作文,但是我要去哪里找啊,求各位大神指点迷津~ (自己真的编不出来,我现在都不知道高中生的英语作文是神马程度= =)[揉脸]
快被折磨死了[拍砖]
2012年12月12日 04点12分 3
回复 ameridol : 嗯,我的意思当然不是高中生作文都很烂,我在找一篇特例,才能拿来分析...其实你说的对,有些大学生作文水平也很烂。所以其实高中生大学生无所谓啦,关键是能找到一篇“范文”。谢啦~ 如果能找到最好[Love]
2012年12月12日 05点12分
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让远在他乡的高中表弟写一篇[开心]
2012年12月12日 04点12分 4
楼上也是表弟... 看来表弟人群的质量普遍有待提高
2012年12月12日 05点12分
[囧] 我只有一个表弟,而且已经工作了~
2012年12月12日 05点12分
回复 MX125 :[大笑]可能是因为表弟的作文水平没有表妹高~
2012年12月12日 05点12分
你们的回复好搞笑啊!!
2012年12月12日 15点12分
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my name is z**,i'm 20 years old. i like american idol.i have many good friends.we always share happiness and sorrow .they are really good guys.i hope i can have a true love .
额。。写的够烂了吧。。。[拍砖][拍砖][拍砖]
2012年12月12日 05点12分 5
你是有多饥渴...[汗]
2012年12月12日 05点12分
[大笑]哈哈,你这篇幅太短啦,没法拿来分析 = =
2012年12月12日 05点12分
回复 DeWyzeLee :呵呵。。已经放弃了。。昨晚躲在被窝里看着鲁西法的故事哭了一晚上。。现在想开了,还是随缘吧。。强求不来的。。呵呵。。[Love]
2012年12月12日 05点12分
回复 优雅の疯 :[囧]。。。
2012年12月12日 05点12分
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优雅の疯 楼主
鸡脚,哥的希望就寄托在你身上了,太困了,我要去碎觉了,明天等你的好消息[开心] @DeWyzeLee 
2012年12月12日 07点12分 8
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小疯子我实在不想给你我的作文,看了第一篇之后我已经打算一把火烧掉让它随风而逝了...
我在网上给你找了一篇还算不错的烂作文希望您能满意[傻笑]
A long-distance flight consumes the same amount of fuel as a car does in several years' time and causes the same amount of environmental damage. Some people think that we should discourage non-essential flights such as tourist air travel instead of limiting the use of cars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
With the arline business becoming more and more popular in public and the growing number of car used,these two factors led to a serious hidden enviornment problem as exhaust emission and decrease of energy
sources.moreover,they were drawn great public attention in recent decade.
A study which is claim that the flight consumes the same amount of fuel as a car does in several years’time and cause the same influence.However,out of this,the question that should we discourage non-essential flights instead of limiting the use of cars which was take off a heated discussion.
The advantage of car is obviously,they can be seen almost everywhere,and vastly affect in people’s daily life,for instence,car can be a nice partner of someone who have to work in very earily morning,people can drive his or her own car rather than waiting for the bus,so it can aviod to been late for work.Also,car add more choices of activity on weekend if a family own one,they can go on a picnic or have a short-distance travel.However,as wella
s the advantage of car,the disadvange also easily to find out,for example,the increaseing number of traffic accident had been taken place by each passing day which is stemming from undue of car used to some extent.
As a one of the hot transportation in recent decade,the use rate of airplane was gradually rising,same as the car,people also benefit a lot in airplane,as we know,plane can arrive and depart between region to region with fast and convenient,so it’s quite useful for business traveler,as wella
s visitos.neverthless,it’s too expensive to go somewhere by plane,and it consumes large of energy
with each flight.
· Overall,these two transportations has its both positive and negative side,but the advantage far outweigh the disadvantage, they become indespensable of our daily life,and paly a increasingly importance role in nowaday society,limiting one of them separately was meaningless,the measure to this is that utilize them as less as possible,or find another transportation which is eco-friendly,such like bike etc.
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2012年12月12日 10点12分 9
其实感觉这篇文章不算特别low,不过我试试能不能再给他“修改”一下。Thanks very much[飞吻] 辛苦啦~
2012年12月12日 15点12分
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