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Dear editor, Recently,whether Grade Three students should take part in the sports has aroused great concerns in our class.Just as the proverb goes that everycoins has two sides. More than half of the studens hold the view that it is good to take part in the sports.The reasons is that body is treasure.Taking exercise every day can develop the health and make students have good spirit.Should the students exercise right,they should relax their body and spirit,even it can improve the sleep and raise the study speed. While less than half of the students take the opposite stand that College Entrance Exam is coming.The study is first.Sports may be spend the time and make the students hurt or feel tired.Perhaps it brings over excited,then affect the study. Resonable as the latter seems,the former outweights the latter.To my knowledge,it is actually a two edged swords with both negative and positive influence.Best wishes. Yours, Li Hua
2007年05月13日 07点05分
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level 1
这是一篇关于“学生是否应进行体育锻炼”的对比类文章,我们学校做的各种各样的卷子都是对比类的,不知今年高考的命题趋势是怎样的。(我原来也是您的学生)
2007年05月13日 07点05分
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level 7
Dear editor, Recently,whether Grade Three students should take part in the sports has aroused great concerns in our class.Just as the proverb goes that every coins has two sides. More than half of the studens hold the view that it is good to take part in the sports.The reasons is that body is treasure.Taking exercise every day can develop the health and make students have good spirit.Should the students exercise right,they should relax their body and spirit,even it can improve the sleep and raise the study speed. While less than half of the students take the opposite stand that College Entrance Exam is coming.The study is first.Sports may be spend the time and make the students hurt or feel tired.Perhaps it brings over excited,then affect the study. Resonable as the latter seems,the former outweights the latter.To my knowledge,it is actually a two edged swords with both negative and positive influence. Best wishes. Yours, Li 有中式英语的痕迹,建议注意搭配和习语,不过语法错误不多,对比类是比较好下笔的,天津还没有出过此类文章。
2007年05月22日 03点05分
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