level 3
2L贴原歌词3L贴本人的渣修改,有错还望轻喷QAQ
敢插楼我就用楼主狗权限把你们都删了,哼╭(╯^╰)╮
2012年11月24日 04点11分
1
level 3
原歌词
Nothing's Carved In Stone
Spirit Inspiration
作词:Nothing's Carved In Stone
作曲:Nothing's Carved In Stone
Dig down inside
Past all deception
You move on with your fist
And your legs
Cover the wounds
No one is laughing
So make “now” your ally
And leap before you look
If you don't trust the future
Continue with that force
What is left to learn now
So do it
And when I look there's someone
That's running by my side
Spirit inspiration
No I can't lose
Being yourself
Adding to knowledge
A new self emerges
I'm born again
Don't look behind
Run far ahead now
The past overlaps and
Is bound to follow you
No I won't
Go follow footsteps
The stereotype is breaking down
Dig inside
Revealing naked heart
Throw fear away
And now farewell so long, so long so long...
If you don't trust the future
Continue with that force
What is left to learn now
So do it
And when I look there's someone
That's running by my side
Spirit inspiration
Go get it
2012年11月24日 04点11分
2
level 3
主要改动:
1.And when I look there's someone中的look全部改为see,look听起来真心不舒服不知道有没有人跟我有同样感受
2.修改一些复数形式
3.一些用词不当
其实挺咬文嚼字的=。=不爱看的别看了
Spirit Inspiration
Dig down inside
Past all deception
You move on with your fists
And your legs
Cover the wounds
No one is laughing
So make “now” be your friend
And leap before you look
If you don't trust the future
Continue with that force
What is left to learn now
So do it
And when I see there's someone
That's running by my side
Spirit inspiration
No I can't lose
Being yourself
Adding to knowledge
A new self emerges
I'm born again
Don't look behind
Run far ahead now
The past overlaps and
Is bound to follow you
If you don't trust the future
Continue with that force
What is left to learn now
So do it
And when I see there's someone
That's running by my side
Spirit inspiration
No I can't lose
No I won'
tGo follow footsteps
The stereotype is breaking down
Dig inside
Revealing naked heart
Throw far away
And now farewell so long, so long so long...
If you don't trust the future
Continue with that force
What is left to learn now
So do it
And when I see there's someone
That's running by my side
Spirit inspiration
Go get it
If you don't trust the future
Continue with that force
What is left to learn now
So do it
And when I see there's someone
That's running by my side
Spirit inspiration
No I can't lose
2012年11月24日 04点11分
3