我经常犯语法错误啦。。。我是高二生啦，我们英语老师每节课上课前都要按号数轮让我们写篇演讲文并背诵出来。。。好多人都一紧张忘词了。。。我的文章大意是每个青少年都应该有一个目标，才不会以后碌碌无为，有个人生理想很重要。以下是我的文章[We should have an aim]I think everyone should have his aim,particularly the teenagers like us.I have some friends and most of them hasn'ttheir own dream.My friends who study well always don'tknow they want to do what in the future.probably they just be concentrated in study but in the same time they lost they aim or they were decided how to do by their parents.I feel a great pity for them because if they also have an aim they will get more interest.#Livig without an aim is like sailing without a compass.An aim will give us support when we are running.For me,I know it is so important to me.It tell me don't give up anytime.And I look at the people those who have their aim as the teacher,lawyer,accountant and more while found they were powerful ai well as the sun.#Therefore,I wish everyone can find an aim in their life and try their best to achieve it.打那么多字打的我都有点恍神了，各位高手拜托帮我忙纠正一下吧。。。

话说才一会儿就沉那么底了啊。。。谁来帮帮我。。。

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most of them dont have their own dreams

dont know what they want to do in the future

concentrate on study, at the same time

or their decisions were made by their parents

it tells me not to give up at any time.

aim to be teacher....

sorry i can't elp anyting

i find their actions are as powerful as their words.

我觉得你跟我的英语老师一样都是直接改正啊，厉害。。。