1Please,take me to your heaven.I want to fly togher with you.I want to follow your steps.Just because of the wings,white and lithe...2Is there a place to hug you again,my angel?If it's the heaven where you are living in,please,wait for me,and I'llbe smiling in front of you...Forever love,Lawliet...3Don't ever be afraid,my angel.There will always be a star shinning brightlyin the darkest nights.Call me,call my name,and I'll always be there,waiting for you,Lawliet...

4Don't ever be afraid,my angel.There will always be a star shinning brightlyin the darkest nights.Call me,call my name,and I'll always be there,waiting for you,Lawliet...5I see a shadow everytime when I close my eyes.I konw it's you.I know you are here in my mind...Angel,please stay.Please always be in my sweetest dreams...Just because,I'm living to love you...6From time to time,you are always in my mind.Think of the most blisful time.Lawliet,promise me,please,you'll never be away...You'll always be here,smiling at me,like you've never left before...

水平有限,还请见谅。

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写的很不错............水平有限?说起来雕塑英文还很不错呢,不过偶也全部看的懂哈得意的飘啊

....素嘛素嘛?咱的英文算过的去啊~....幸福地飘啊~

强啊~！不过偶也看得懂，笑。压韵也很8错，笑。雕塑啊~我写文言文你写英文……你强！Don't ever be afraid,my angel. There will always be a star shinning brightly in the darkest nights. Call me,call my name, and I'll always be there, waiting for you,Lawliet... 这段可以说得很好呢~笑啊啊啊啊~~~~~L, 你在我心中,真的好美啊!!!纠结去了^^——————roy_rosu榴莲

....我也没打算不让人看懂啊////(众:还不是你英语不行|||)

雕塑，你那压韵是怎么弄的啊？？？？？CJ望天。------------------榴莲

.......|||发现贴错了点...1Everytime I see your silhouette,I pray for you.Lawliet,please,I just want to see your face again...Just one time,forever...2The wind is blowing.Softly,I dream of you again...Please,take me to your heaven.I want to fly togher with you.I want to follow your steps.Just because of the wings,white and lithe...

我没押韵啊?话说只有写中文我才押韵的,英文的不会押...

厚脸皮地D上去|||

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继续DDDDDDDDD写得怎么有一种歌词加现代诗的感觉

话说我原本就是写现代诗外加歌词的...可是遇到L后就写不出来了...L有英国血统,所以用英文好了~

-__________,-下次学雕塑，写篇英文的！！！挖卡卡！！

咱的英文不值得学习|||

糟～我流鼻血了＝口＝

鼻血？递纸巾ing