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Recently some people on line disscuss the question whether students should surffer the Internet or not. Most of the people support students should be surrtted the Internet.Firstly,they think on line can make many friends. Secondly,they believe that students can freely expess their ideas on the Internet.Finally,it is an also important point on line is good for learning English. On the contrary ,some people think students should be forbidden surffing the Internet.for one thing,it is great waste of time surf the net.For another thing,it is affecting our study.Besides,students on line is likely to be taken in. In my opinion,we should be right attuide for Internet. 
2007年04月10日 05点04分 1
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大奇不好意思,有拼写错误。这是别人帮我打的。
2007年04月12日 13点04分 2
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大奇赶快看一下啦谢谢
2007年04月22日 09点04分 3
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