07版53 441页 图画作文 请打分 标注因必扣错失的分 At a corner of the Square stood a booth selling the ice-cream.Hardly had a woman waited in line for it when a youth ran past her with his hand snatching the lady's handbag.In the meanwhile the passer-bys who had seen the scene were all running after the cutpurse.So fast did he escape that no one could catch him.However,an old man sitting on the bench also witnessed this incident.He was brilliant enough to use his handle of umbrella to clasp the thief's leg,consequencely the man was held up to fall down to the ground with the handbag away from his hand.After a while, the police came here to arrest the thief.The moment the aged returned the bag to the woman,she appreciated it very much that the old do a great favour to her.Furthermore,the passer-bys praised the quality of the old man.But for his bravery and telligence,the lady would have lost large number of valuable things.

At a corner of the Square stood a booth (亭子能卖东西吗？)selling the ice-cream.Hardly had a woman waited in line for it when a youth ran past her with his hand snatching the lady's handbag.In the meanwhile the passer-bys who had seen the scene were all running after the cutpurse.So fast did he escape that no one could catch him.However,an old man sitting on the bench also witnessed this incident.He was brilliant enough to use his handle of （the）umbrella to clasp the thief's leg,consequen（t）ly the man was held up to fall down to the ground with the handbag away from his hand.After a while, the police came here to arrest the thief.The moment the aged returned the bag to the woman,she appreciated it very much that the old do a great favour to her.Furthermore,the passer-bys praised the quality of the old man.But for his bravery and (in)telligence,the lady would have lost large number of valuable things. 20分左右，就是有的地方不是很流畅，高级语法有点多是不流畅的原因。