你,冷漠得让人无法接近可我能够感受到你的孤独你表现得对成功有绝对自信但我理解你压力笼罩下的悲哀小提琴不再歌咏欢乐悲伤的心绪流转在指尖随音乐在月光中飘扬我,在暗地里陪你忧伤我明白你生活的无奈于是我不会奢求你太多只是默默地看着你静听你的音乐感受你的灵魂～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～自己随便写写的，大家不要见笑啊。／。。

不错

很好噢

短诗完美的表现出这个完美主义者的孤傲与贵族气质！

嗯嗯，清冷如月，耀目如莲。莲果然是孤傲的王子啊，孤独而又独自承担冰冷。希望有一天，冷漠的冰山会被温暖的太阳融化。

呵呵~`有诗意的孩子~`

写得不错意境很美

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嘛~俺之前都有这个想法~写诗不是件容易的事哦~~
LZ能把他弄长一点嘛~?

ding 5

嗯，很好！

还不错啦

嗯哈

大爱···

啊拉。。。油菜花真是遍地都是啊，
lz
你让我这种只会灌水刷帖的人情何以堪啊orz

我这里还有英文版的：Moon&Forest
                         ____To Tsukimori
          You are so cold that nobody can approach you
          but I can feel your loneliness
          You express that you have great confidence in winning
          but I understand your sadness shrouded in pressure
          The violin doesn't sing happiness anymore
          sad mood flows and turns between your fingers
          flutering in the moonlight accompanied with music
          I am sad with you in the dark
          I understand the melancholy in youelife
          so I won't ask you for too much
          I just watch you in silence
          listening to your music quiltly
          and feeling your soul...

刺激。。。强烈的刺激。。。

不错不错~
楼主厉害~

大爱~~~~~~
O(∩_∩)O~