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这个，能看懂就够了吧，没必要那么认真
2012年08月27日 04点08分
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解毒剂crea
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I went a-nation today, I want to say that "ayu is still a queen of japan, no one can instead" i bought ticket at station because a girl have one more.
Maybe there are some mistake because my memory is not clear now
这句应该是：
I went to a-nation live （show）today. I want to say that Ayu is still the Queen of Japan, and no one can replace. I bought one ticket because….后面问题不大
去某地当然要加to啊。Instead是副词，不是动词，不能这么用。另外queen还是用the比较好，表示独一无二。
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The show started at 15:30,,and AAA is the first performer, but I was still buying the ayu’s big towel when they are singing,,when I entered the stadium AAA was
singing “hurricane riri”
And then
skip skip>>>>>>>
The show started at 15:30, and AAA is the first performer这句没问题。
But I was still buying (可以不用the)Ayu’s big towel when they were(过去时) singing.后面还好没问题。