level 1
No one can deny that the traffic problems have greatly influence our daily life.The more cars we have ,the more traffic jam will be.Having had many cars,the road of tiajin did not as wide as it used be.In case of it,the goverment should take measures to provide more large public transportation and make gas more expensive. What's more,encouraging citizens to ride bikes or sharing a car to the workplace is necessary. In a word,solving the traffic problems is not only the goverment's responsibility ,but also our's.
2007年03月16日 15点03分
1
level 7
No one can deny that the traffic problems have greatly influence(d) our daily life.The more cars we have ,the more traffic jam(s) will be.(逻辑主语是谁？路能有车吗)Having had many cars,the road of tiajin （was）did not as wide as it used be.In case of it,the goverment should take measures to provide (more large?) public transportation and make gas more expensive. What's more,encouraging citizens to ride bikes or sharing a car to the workplace is necessary. In a word,solving the traffic problems is not only the goverment's responsibility ,but also our's. 没那么烂，一般烂吧，都是小错误，时态，情态动词，基础知识比高级语法对你更重要。
2007年03月19日 04点03分
2
level 1
恩,我知道了.那怎么提高基础知识呢?对了,大奇,就这破作文我们老师还给了19分,我哭!!1晕死!!!
2007年03月19日 14点03分
3
