level 10
我唱了的歌词:
When the morning.I get up early.
I couldn't find my dog.
His name is DANNY. He is very Fool.
But he is my old friend.
I'm very surprised & looking for him.
I called his name Many times "DANNY","DANNY".
Then,I can hear Danny's voice "Bow wow wow!"
He was fighting with another dog in next garden.
Keep on fighting!
You are fool,but big fighter!
Keep on RUNNING!
Your eyes are burning,yes burning.
When the morning.I get up early.
I couldn't find my dog.
His name is DANNY. He is very Fool.
But he is my old friend.
I'm very surprised & looking for him.
I called his name Many times "DANNY","DANNY".
Then,I can hear Danny's voice "Bow wow wow!"
He was fighting with another dog in next garden.
Keep on fighting!
You are fool,but big fighter!
Keep on RUNNING!
Your eyes are burning,yes burning.
I'm very SAD,and hold him so tight.
I called his name many times "DANNY","DANNY".
Then,he said "Good bye" to me "Bow wow wow!"
"Danny is dying"
I can't believe it!
Danny I love you! Danny I want you!
Danny I need you! Danny I'd hold you!
Your touch,your mind,your eyes,and all!
I don't need more than words,yes
DANNY IS ALL!
Keep on fighting!
You are fool,but big fighter!
Keep on RUNNING!
Your eyes are burning,yes burning.
K(x_x)----------- keep on ffffffffffffffffffff...... (X_X)
2012年08月16日 16点08分
4
level 1
唱得很好听,不过声音放不开,有些地方紧张了吧,感觉你是
捏
着喉咙唱的,那样子会唱得很辛苦,我听出来你有点...
2012年08月16日 18点08分
5
对呀我一楼都写了我是偷偷摸摸紧张的唱,谢谢提点:)你有觉得好听就可以了!
2012年08月16日 18点08分