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As is known to all, the quality of life in your future depends on the last year in high school. There is no denying that it is a challenge for us to complete it in a right way.
In order to achieve a goal,not only do I have many troubles in studying,but also I feel the pressure when I first started. It is my parents that expect me to go to a popular college,for they thing I will be able to enjoy a happier life in future .In addition, so heavy are tests that we don’t have enough time to do exercises or relax myself. I hold my opinion that we definitely meet some difficulties in the last year in high school, but what we do is conclude experience from it.
There is a famous saying that Nothing is impossible if you put your heart in to it . I believe that I can overcome it with my faith.

As is known to all, the quality of life in your future depends on the last year in high school. There is no denying that it is a challenge for us to complete it in a right way.
In order to achieve a goal,not only do I have many troubles in studying,but also I feel the pressure when I first started. It is my parents that expect me to go to a popular college,for they thing I will be able to enjoy a happier life in future .In addition, so heavy are tests that we don’t have enough time to do exercises or relax myself. I hold my opinion that we definitely meet some difficulties in the last year in high school, but what we do is conclude experience from it.
There is a famous saying that Nothing is impossible if you put your heart in to it . I believe that I can overcome it with my faith.
第一篇

不真行

From the picture,what I understand is we should meet the needs of social development.As is known to us, a flower grow comfortable in the green house. if we move it outsite,it can be said with certainty that the flower will be dying as soon as possible.
Compared with our social life, these is no doubt that we aren’t able to enjoy a happy life without parents and friends. Besides, I still remember the big earthquake, which happened on May 12 2008. it was so powerful that so many children lost their familys and relatives.Sad as they are, ,it is under the umbrella of our help that they are becoming more and more stronger.
In a word, what I want to stress is that we are supposed to live in a “green house”,only in this way can we grow strong and enjoyable.
这是今天的！！！