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The Saltwater Room
Owl City
I opened my eyes last night and saw you in the low light
Walking down by the bay, on the shore,
staring up at the planes that aren't there anymore
I was feeling the night grow old and you were looking so cold
so Like an introvert, I drew my over shirt
Around my arms and began to shiver violently before
You happened to look and see the tunnels all around me
Running into the dark underground
All the subways around create a great sound
To my motion fatigue: farewell
With your ear to a seashell
You can hear the waves in underwater caves
As if you actually were inside a saltwater room
Time together is just never quite enough
When you and I are alone, I've never felt so at home
What will it take to make or break this hint of love?
We need time, only time
Can you believe that the crew has gone
and wouldn't let me sign on?
All my islands have sunk in the deep,
I can hardly relax or even oversleep
I feel as if I were home some nights
when we count all the ship lights
I guess I'll never know why sparrows love the snow
We'll turn off all of the lights and set this ballroom aglow
~~So tell me darling, do you wish we’d fall in love?~~
Time together is just never quite enough
When you and I are alone, I’ve never felt so at home
What will it take to make or break this hint of love?
We need time, only time
When we’re apart whatever are you thinking of?
If this is what I call home, why does it feel so alone?
So tell me darling, do you wish we’d fall in love?
All the time, all the time
Time together is just never quite enough
When we’re apart whatever are you thinking of?
What will it take to make or break this hint of love?
So tell me darling, do you wish we’d fall in love?


the saltwater room是经典的翻译例子。大家看看我的版本好了，也许会有雷同或者不足，欢迎指正。

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The Saltwater Room 深海空间
Owl City
I opened my eyes last night and saw you in the low light
Walking down by the bay, on the shore,
昨晚当我睁开双眼，只见你孤单在昏暗的灯光下漫步，
经过海滩，立在岸上。
staring up at the planes that aren't there anymore
I was feeling the night grow old and you were looking so cold
眼看着飞机划过天际不再出现，我感到入夜渐深而你愈发孤冷。
so Like an introvert, I drew my over shirt
Around my arms and began to shiver violently before
You happened to look and see the tunnels all around me
Running into the dark underground
在你碰巧看到通向黑暗地铁的那些围绕在我身边无形的隧道之前，
我如同内向沉默的一人，悄悄画上围绕在我双臂的罩衫开始剧烈的颤抖


All the subways around create a great sound
To my motion fatigue: farewell
无数的地铁都在创造一个美好的声音，
向我的行动役使说再见
With your ear to a seashell
You can hear the waves in underwater caves
伴随着你耳旁的海螺，可以听见海底洞穴最深处波浪声
As if you actually were inside a saltwater room
有如你真的置身于深海空间一样。

今天晚了，先睡觉。明天继续更新，我会告诉大家我这么翻译的原因。

The Saltwater Room 海鲜大酒楼 ≥▽≤……【滚粗……

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我觉得叫“盐水屋”比较文艺诶

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