题目：最近你校学生会组织学生开展了一场讨论，主题是：What is the beauty standard?假如你是学生会主席，请根椐下表学生讨论的结果写一份总结材料，并谈谈对以上观点的看法。学生观点1：一幅好脸蛋就是一封介绍信。理由：在社交、竞争、求职等方面有着不可低估的作用。学生观点2：漂亮不能当饭吃。理由：追求外形的美而放弃了内在的美不是真正的美。你的看法：美的标准因社会、文化和国度不同而存在差异。无论是直观上的美还是心灵上的美，这些对美的界定都是不无道理的。（呼，题好长终于抄完了！呵呵） With the sun setting in the west,our heated debate,on what is the beauty standard,is going to the end. Just as the proverb goes,every coin has two sides . Some students are for that the opinion that the charming face is a recommendation .Among the competitors do the beauties have the advangtages in communication,competion and appling positions. while others adopt the opposite view that goodlooking as the beauties are,the beauties who are short for spirtitual beauty are not really beautiful. As far as I am concerned ,the beauty standard is anything but the same with different cultures,societies and nations.Not only does the appearance beauty belongs to the beauty standard,but the spiritual beauty does.

(记叙文中才用呢With the sun setting in the west,)our heated debate,on what is the beauty standard,is going to the end. Just as the proverb goes,every coin has two sides . Some students are for that the opinion that the charming face is a recommendation .不用倒装Among the competitors do the beauties have the advangtages in communication,competion and appling positions. while others adopt the opposite view that goodlooking as the beauties are,the beauties who are short for spirtitual beauty are not really beautiful. As far as I am concerned ,the beauty standard is anything but the same with different cultures,societies and nations.Not only does the appearance beauty belongs to the beauty standard,but the spiritual beauty does. 结构很好，语言基本地道。20分没有太多需要改动的地方，就是高级语法有些地方用的不是很恰当。

原来还有这么多不足的地方，呵呵，多亏了你呀不胜感激！！！