错误超多的，我当时写完了没检查么。我的神啊
发上来看看。错误不下5个吧。我记得当时这篇作文得分挺高的啊。怎么回事我居然写出了everybaby are 这种错误来

In the morden world,everybady are under pressure.Adult work for their lifes,teens hardly spent all time for their study . It seems that teens have more pressure than adult .After school ,parent always take their childen form activity to activity.However these activities are for their study .Teens hardly have can own organized the time .Even they have no time to do more exercises.So.we can`t complain that they aren`t active or creative student .Aslo can`t complain that they don`t have strong bord. Teens should have their own world .On the one hand .They should learn to how to organized the time .know to how to study and to have strong bord .On the other hand ,parent should more belive their childen .they need to more time to doing the thing what they like to do .The same ,he should learn to face the world .Learn to own have bright future.

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