好像说~求助~有那么一点过了~~~没那么严重吧~~——————无敌题目分割线——————假设你班将举行一次英语班会，主题为“中学生应该如何使用家长给的零花钱”，请根据提示写一篇发言稿(表格实在是没法子打了……67老师麻烦一点了~）使用方式好处存入银行养成节约的习惯购买书籍获取知识其他培养兴趣（音乐、体育、集邮等）词数100左右，参考词汇：零花钱pocket moneyDear friends,————————以下，就是我写的东西了——————Today, we’ll have a discussion about the "As a middle-school student, how to use the pocket money which was given by parents?"I have three suggestions:In the first, saving our pocket money in the bank is valuable .It is wonderful idea to make a fine habit--no wasting.Moreover, the books, having been bought, by the pocket money, could give us a great deal of knowledge.Besides, in our interested things, as music、sports、stamps collection and so on, the pocket money could be used.Not fairly much as pocket money is, it could be used meaningful.If we couldn't use the pocket money in a significant place, the pocket money would be useless.Don’t you think so?——————终于敲完了~~~累啊~~————————嘿嘿，今天刚上完您的课~所以趁着东西还热着~就写了一篇~~麻烦您指正一下啦~~~~

Today, we’ll have a discussion about the "As a middle-school student, how to use the pocket money which was given by parents?" 这句话还是不用一般将来是比较好，要注意时态PS你是高二还是高三？写完东西要自己检查一下有没有低级错误着牙根部较不容易丢分，当然我没说你都是低级错误，是经验之谈你要耐心等67老大最近比较忙，也许不能马上回复你

I have three suggestions: In the first（好像在作文中没见过这样用一般是直接firstly或是老大讲的替换恶心词汇里面过的）, saving our pocket money in the bank is valuable （valuable用在这我觉得不恰当）.It is wonderful idea （名词裸体出现了）to make a fine habit--no wasting. Moreover, the books, having been bought, by the pocket money, could give us a great deal of knowledge. Besides, in our interested things,（such） as music、（注意标点的运用）sports、stamps collection and so on, the pocket money could be used. Not fairly much as pocket money is, it could be used meaningful. If we couldn't use the pocket money in a significant place, the pocket money would be useless. Don’t you think so? (could你用了好多次，但是我觉得有的没必要使用你可以在改改)个人意见这篇文章18分左右，你应该多练习仔细看笔记，如果你还没上几节课就先写片断，因为老大在后面的课里还会讲好多注意事项继续努力

首先拜谢前辈赐教啦~~~确实犯了很多低级错误~~下次一定注意的啦~我是高二的~现在上的是高考特训上~~今天刚结了刘老师的课程~~

我也是89啊…………握手握手

但我是高三嘿嘿

啊啊~我上学晚么~~~~不过总而言之确实是小阿~~

在这里没有什么大小之分，大家都是为了一个目的所以一起加油啦互相帮助嘛

感谢楼上了。涕零中。

尽量能帮你分担就分担啦，不用这样，要是改的不对，还要你再帮我改拉

67同志~好像真得很辛苦阿~大年三十也要上课~

不要质疑，他就是很辛苦

好像已经过了很多天了……自己顶一下先…………

救治一两天他就能回了

是啊~等待ing~~不过不能让它沉下去~~~

Today, we’ll have a discussion about the "As a middle-school student, how to use the pocket money which was given by parents?" I have three suggestions: In the first, saving our pocket money in the bank is valuable .It is wonderful idea to make a fine habit--no wasting. (To begin with, puting our pocket money in the bank can help us form a habit of saving money.)Moreover, the books, having been bought, by the pocket money, could give us a great deal of knowledge. Besides, (the money can also be spent on our hobbies, such as...)in our interested things, as music、sports、stamps collection and so on, the pocket money could be used. Not fairly much as pocket money is, it could be used meaningful. If we couldn't use the pocket money (wisely)in a significant place, the pocket money would be useless(用词不当). Don’t you think so?

继续写吧，需要多看正确的东西，用词多处不地道。整体可以

呵呵~thank you~~辛苦啦~