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a 哈...那正是我想看到的呵呵

目前,越来越多中学生利用周末上各种各样的培训班或请家教.存在两种观点:有些人认为必要,跟老师学比自己学好 可以巩固课堂所学内容 可以学到更多的东西 另一些人认为没有必要,容易养成依赖习惯 学生需要时间休息 许多培训班和家教以赢利为目的根据以上提示以Is a Training Class or Family Teacher Necessary?为题写短文. Up to now,an increasing number of middle school students have taken advantage of the time of weekends to attend many different kinds of training classes or to ask for family teachers.Just as the proverbs says,every coin has two sides.Some students take the stand of that it is necessary to have a training class or family teacher.It is much quite more understandable to follow the teacher than self study.What is better,not only can we strengthen the knowledge that we learn in class,but also we can learn more new things.What other students firmly believe is that there is no need to have a training class or family teacher.Hard as we study,we are in need of time to have a relaxation.On the other other hand,if we followed the teacher all along,we could not study without teachers in the future.What makes us irritated is that a number of the classes and the family teachers are aimed at making money.There is a lot to be said for bothsides.Reasonable as the former seems,I prefer the latter.If we had to have lessons at weekends,how miserable my life would be!我是高二学生，没怎么写过作文，请６７老师帮忙批改一下，给个分．

这哥们怎么发这么多遍呀

晕.......７楼的.....你可不可以不要在我贴上乱发你的问题...........　　　　　　　　我怒了

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谢谢你的生日礼物，7楼，问问题请自己建贴 Up to now,an increasing number of middle school students have taken advantage of the time of weekends to attend many different kinds of training classes or to ask for family teachers.Just as the proverbs say（s）,every coin has two sides.Some students take the stand （of删掉） that it is necessary to have a training class or family teacher.It is （much quite more删掉） understandable to follow the teacher than self study.What is better,not only can we strengthen the knowledge that we learn in class,but also we can learn more new things.What other students firmly believe is that there is no need to have a training class or family teacher.Hard as we study,we are in need of time to have a relaxation.On the other other hand,if we followed the teacher all along,we could not study without teachers in the future.What makes us irritated is that a number of the classes and the family teachers are aimed at making money.There is a lot to be said for bothsides.Reasonable as the former seems,I prefer the latter.If we had to have lessons at weekends,how miserable my life would be! 17分－19分，有些地方表达不是很地道和清楚，有的高级语法使用不当。不过看出你的基础很好，继续努力拉。