偶门22号考英语鸟~~老师说区里给的范围有片追星的 作文~~ 可素偶的英语老是上不了102分,这次立志要考到啊~~ 所以想请各位姐姐们帮帮忙啊 !!! 就中考一类文的水平就行~用点什么词组搭配啊,定语宾语从句(70到80就行)的!~~ 谢谢姐姐们喽~~为了偶完整的假期不用"死"在参考书\补习班之间<救命啊!!!!!> ============================================== 偶在下面也会打一篇偶自己写的,麻烦大家帮着改改~~谢谢鸟~ I

MY favorite music group is TVXQ who are come from KOREA.There are five members in the group. They are not only handsome but also sing well.And they sing the kind of music that I love to hear.SOME of the lyrics I can't understand,but the melody really very good.AND that's why I love them. Although the teacher have to say that music can get in the way of school work.I don't think so. when I am tired,I like to listen to the music to relax. And I learnt from the group of TVXQ that young people should catch UP their dreams. I think is one of the reason that why many students love pop singers!~ ==================================== 真素丢人了_._|||,请姐姐门指教把 谢谢啊!!!!!!I

偶不会太多英文哦,100分的卷子只得了86分~~~可是偶会帮忙灭十的拉(这是从别的地方偷来的图图哦)

句子第一个词不可以用and其他还有几个地方写得不太对~那个who are come from korea写成who are from korea就可以了~also sing well应该是also sings well第二段改成这样although the teachers may say that music gets in the way of school work, but i don't think so. When I am tired, i like to listen to music to relax. (And I learnt from the group of TVXQ that young people should catch UP their dreams.)这句我意思没太懂 I think that is one of the reasons why many students love pop singers!~I

第一段："but also sing well" 改成“but also good at singing" might be better;"the melody really good"缺少谓语"is";最后一句and可以去掉。第二段：同意楼上的，另，"catch up their dreams"是不是想表达"hold our dreams and try our best to make them come true"瞎改 仅供参考哦I

弱弱d说一句..4楼d亲.although和but不能连用d..其他强烈同意.嘿.

总结了大家说的，又自己加了点MY favorite music group is TVXQ who are come from KOREA(who are from Korea).There are five members in the group. They are not only handsome but also sing well(but also are good at singing).And they sing the kind of music that I love to hear(后面开头有and了，这句and去掉比较好).SOME of the lyrics I can't understand,but the melody really very good(is really very good).AND that's why I love them. Although the teacher have to say(have to?不得不？意思不太对阿，就says好了，注意第三人称单数) that music can(may比can婉转) get in the way of school work(这句要说啥？影响学习吗，表达得不太好).(这里应该是逗号)I don't think so. when I am tired,I like to listen to the music to relax. And I learnt(时态有问题，改成learn) from the group of TVXQ(去掉of) that young people should catch UP their dreams(hold their dreams and try their best to make them come true). I think is(it is,缺少形式主语) one of the reason that why(去掉that,先行词重复) many students love pop singers!~ and好像可以用在句子开头，仅供参考了~~I

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xiexie鸟~~~~~~家里就是人才多!!

那个啥，偶素英语科代表8过问题似乎都解决了-------------------------------在中，生日快乐Our HeroYou are my angelWe love you forever...

呵呵~~向姐姐们看齐!好好学习英语~可是我门模拟考时语文阅读名为<<汉语危机>>好多人向语文老师立志认真学习国语,打出"英语不及格说明偶爱国"口号~让人汗...

MY favorite music group is TVXQ who are come from KOREA.There are five members in the group. They are not only handsome but also sing well.And they sing the kind of music that I love to hear.SOME of the lyrics I can't understand,but the melody really very good.AND that's why I love them. Although the teacher have to say that music can get in the way of school work.I don't think so. when I am tired,I like to listen to the music to relax. And I learnt from the group of TVXQ that young people should catch UP their dreams. I think is one of the reason that why many students love pop singers!~ ================================================================TVXQ, this is my favorite singing group who come from Korea. All there are five members. They are not only very handsome but also good at singing and dancing. Their music attracks me a lot. Even I can't understand all their lyrics, the melody of their songs is so charming! I don't exactly agree with some teachers' idea that music may get in the way of school work. Enjoying music is one of the methods to ease my preasure. From the group, I also realize that youngers should have dreams and should catch up with them. Maybe such kind of encouragement is the reason why so many teens love pop singers!==============================================================偶是学法语的说，英语已经退化到一定程度，楼主就凑合着看吧。。。I

这个贴~~~- -纯学习好的银

我觉得我的汉语能学好就不错了，英文的，哎~~~~~~~基本还老师了

亲应该是高中生吧~ 我就尽量在你原文上改了下~ MY favorite music group is TVXQ who are come from KOREA.There are five members in the group. They are not only handsome but also sing well.And they sing the kind of music that I love to hear.SOME of the lyrics I can't understand,but the melody really very good.AND that's why I love them. Although the teacher have to say that music can get in the way of school work.I don't think so. when I am tired,I like to listen to the music to relax. And I learnt from the group of TVXQ that young people should catch UP their dreams. I think is one of the reason that why many students love pop singers!~ ==================================== My favorite music team is TVXQ which comes from Korea. There are five members in the group. They are not only handsome but also good at singing. Their music is just the right type I like. Though I'm not able to understand some lyrics of the songs, the melody is really wonderful. That's why I love them.Some teachers may think that this kind of interest will affect school work, but I'm not agree with them. When I'm tired, I like to listen to their music to relax myself. Moreover, I've learnt a lot from TVXQ. Because of them, I realized that I should try my best to pursue my dreams. They are not obstacles in my life but the source of my vigour and courage.I

啊~ 一个小地方再改下~I like to listen to their music to relax myself. =>I like listening to their music to relax myself.

LET ME HELP YOU~改了下~ MY favorite music group is TVXQ who are come from KOREA.There are five members in the group. They are not only handsome but also sing well.And they sing the kind of music that I love to hear.SOME of the lyrics I can't understand,but the melody really very good.AND that's why I love them. Although the teacher have to say that music can get in the way of school work.I don't think so. when I am tired,I like to listen to the music to relax. And I learnt from the group of TVXQ that young people should catch UP their dreams. I think is one of the reason that why many students love pop singers!~ ==================================== My favorite music team is TVXQ which comes from Korea. There are five members in this group. They are not only handsome but also good in singing. Their music is just the right type I like. Though I'm not able to understand some lyrics of the songs, but the melody were really wonderful. That's why I love them. Some teachers may tought that this kind of interest will affect the school work, but I'm not agree with them. When I'm tired, I will listen their music to relax myself. Moreover, I've learnt a lot from TVXQ. Because of them, I realized that I should try my best to pursue my dreams. They are not obstacles in my life but the source of my vigour and courage.I