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噗、不说什么了= =、跟她们一起看电影去=w=~
2012年06月06日 05点06分
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I'm sorry. I didn't go out of my way to hurt you.
In fact,my English must be worse than yours.
Because you are a high school student,I'm only a middle school student.
For example,I didn't know that there is a word called "heart-broken" until you told me just now.
Just in the conversatian we had just now,I had learned from you!
So,it's certain that your English is better than mine.
[I don't know how many mistakes I made just now.+ +]
2012年06月07日 11点06分
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In fact,my English must be worse than yours.
Because you are a high school student,I'm only a middle school student.
For example,I didn't know that there is a word called "heart-broken" until you told me just now.
Just in the conversatian we had just now,I had learned from you!
So,it's certain that your English is better than mine.
[I don't know how many mistakes I made just now.+ +]
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……我只看出两个……
Because you are a high school student,【but】I'm only a middle school student.一句话里不能有两个完整的句子结构，所以中间可以加上but,and等连词，也可以加上that,whose等先行词构成从句。当然还可以最简单的……把逗号换成句号……
For example,I didn't know that there 【was】 a word called "heart-broken" until you told me just now.
从句中时态要和主句一致~
Though I am a high school student,my oral English is poor……you knows little words than me ,but you can use them very well.I am very ashamed……
2012年06月07日 11点06分
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Because you are a high school student,【but】I'm only a middle school student.一句话里不能有两个完整的句子结构，所以中间可以加上but,and等连词，也可以加上that,whose等先行词构成从句。当然还可以最简单的……把逗号换成句号……
For example,I didn't know that there 【was】 a word called "heart-broken" until you told me just now.
从句中时态要和主句一致~
Though I am a high school student,my oral English is poor……you knows little words than me ,but you can use them very well.I am very ashamed……
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额那个啥，是我记错了么……
第一个，我记得老师说，说得好像不是这个……说得好像是because和so不能在一起，原来它和but可以在一起啊~
第二个的话，从句部分不是永恒存在的客观真理么，难道不是要永远用一般现在时的么？
I think you needn't to be ashamed.
Because my grades of English isn't usually very good.
My grade of the latest English test is only 89.
[The total score is 100.]
Now,you know,my English is very bad.
2012年06月07日 12点06分
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第一个，我记得老师说，说得好像不是这个……说得好像是because和so不能在一起，原来它和but可以在一起啊~
第二个的话，从句部分不是永恒存在的客观真理么，难道不是要永远用一般现在时的么？
I think you needn't to be ashamed.
Because my grades of English isn't usually very good.
My grade of the latest English test is only 89.
[The total score is 100.]
Now,you know,my English is very bad.
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小星跟铃酱这是在练英语吗？
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