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书面表达(满分15分) 假如你叫李平,你校高三同学正在开展一场讨论,讨论的主题是:高三学生要不要参加体育锻炼?请你跟据下面所提供的信息,给某英语报社写一封信,介绍讨论情况。 55%的学生认为 1 应该每天进行体育锻炼 2 可以做早操、打乒乓球,但不要时间太长 3 锻炼能增强体质,减少疾病 4 运动使大脑休息,使复习效果更好 45%的同学认为 1 锻炼浪费时间 2 锻炼使人疲劳 3 运动以后很兴奋,较长时间不能复习功课 4 运动中可能会受伤注意:1 信的开头已为你写好。2 词数100 左右。 I’m writing to tell you about a discussion we’ve had about whether students of senier 3 should take physical exercise。(下面是学生的答题) 55% students hold the view that in order to keep our body fit and prevent badly disease in no case should we take physical exercise。To do some sports such as moring exiserse or table tennis porperly can keep our brain in a good condition so that we can put all our heart into study。 While 45% stuents take the opposite stand that being a students of senier 3 shouldn’t waste too much time on PE。The more physical exercise you take ,the more tired and hurt you would got,So excited after taking PE that you hardly study at once。 yours。 LiPing 
2007年01月10日 14点01分 1
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55% students hold the view that in order to keep our body fit and prevent badly(badly什么词性?他修饰的又是什么词?应该改成?) disease (in no case should we take physical exercise。)(上一句看不懂应改成we should take physical exercise)To do some sports such as morning exiserse or table tennis porperly can keep our brain in a good condition so that we can put all our heart into study。 While 45% stuents take the opposite stand that being a students of senier 3 (we)必须加上这个we否则就无主语了shouldn’t waste too much time on PE。 The more physical exercise you take ,the more tired and hurt you would (get吧!!!)got,(下面的句子是一半,主语呢??)So excited after taking PE that you hardly study at once。 yours。 LiPing18分主要是两个长句子让人看不懂,都是缺少主语的半句话整体结构不错但是小的地方出卖了你,你的基础还是有问题的.请仔细检查语法和句子的完整性.
2007年01月17日 07点01分 2
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超越奇迹 楼主
1,badly(badly什么词性?他修饰的又是什么词?应该改成?) disease 我认为badly disease在用法上与badly hurt类似.您说呢?2,(in no case should we take physical exercise。)(上一句看不懂应改成we should take physical exercise) 我认为此句用了倒装,为什么不对?
2007年01月18日 15点01分 3
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