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好久没写了,估计都退化了这时也不哪个区的会考模拟卷 Acording to a investigation ,more than 60% students of senior3 stay up late. Now,the students are facing a challenge,the College EntranceExamination,and thinking that study is nothing but important.With the expectation of parents,they have pressure so that they stay up late. As a consequence,students tend to feel sheepy all day,have bad memories and miss the points which teacher stresses,so it'shard for them to get high marks in all kinds of tests.What's worse,their health turn bad. In my opinion,we should not only listen to the teacher carefully in class to improve the effect of study but also take more exercise to keep healthy and make progress.
2007年01月06日 09点01分 1
level 7
Acording to a(an是很久没有写了,都不分a ,an 了) investigation ,more than 60% students of senior 3 stay up late. Now,the students are facing a challenge,the College Entrance Examination,and thinking that study is nothing but important. With the expectation of parents,they have(are suffering from ) pressure so that they stay up late. As a consequence,students tend to feel s(l)heepy all day,(to)have bad memories and(to) miss the points which teacher stresses,so it's hard for them to get high marks in all kinds of tests.What's worse,their health turn(s三单也不知道加) bad. In my opinion,we should not only listen to the teacher carefully in class to improve the effect of study but also take more exercise to keep healthy and(to) make progress. 这种烂题目,服了,写一些高考真题中有代表性的,17分低级语法错误太多,能犯的都犯了.继续坚持写.
2007年01月08日 05点01分 2
level 6
惭愧惭愧,我一定继续练笔,再荒这不写我就虾米了...
2007年01月08日 14点01分 3
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