Fear is not shameful for me.
There's only thing I sacred is lost you.
When it is a totally mad in my soul.
I just in a sorrow which would kill me.
Then it kill me.
Yes it kill me.
Now I feel like in Constantinople in 1453.
Then I saw the doomsday of Roma.
Then I can drink the last blood of the Constantinus XI.
Then I can cry as a man in Imperium Romanum Orientale.
To show my tears out.
To die in Bosporus.
Then let the seawater,the air,the sunset to tell you I miss you.
When I in Constantinople,When I am dying in spears of Turkeys.
When I sank in sea,When I see the last sunset of Constantinople.
When the StSophia's fall.
When I lost my life.
I wanna a hand of your hair with me.
When I am dying in Bosporus.
When I abandon the swear to watch you to fight.
When I stop my breath in Constantinople.


阿拉- -很久没有写东西了- -手生手生

于是这些全是楼主自己写的么=_=英文废伤不起orz

我是英文废物啊QAQ

同上

自然是自己写的- -
意在用我最喜欢的城市，君士坦丁堡去形容我爱的人

咦楼主英文很好啊是住外国的么→_→

There's only thing I sacred is lost you.
sacred不是adj么后面可以加be动词？
There's only thing 前面有's后面在thing前面应该有a或者one吧？
初中狗英语渣求指点。口。
好机油在备考托福经常性拖着小爷讨论作文ORZ托福作文真SB

When it is a totally mad in my soul
totally有ly了绝对是adj= =|||
冠词不是应该跟在名词前面么

mad我用作名词了- -
话说诗歌什么的对语法要求不是很严格的

若作为名词应该翻译为完全疯了，那么又干嘛要加冠词呢

参照a total eclipse of the heart这句话

末日

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total eclipse不是固定搭配按着月蚀还是什么的翻译的么= =|||这时候作为一个整体啊可是totally mad是两个词而且前面的修饰后面的

好有文采。。

猫受英语亮了v