Micheal,作文!!!!05年天津
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The National Book Fair To more than 60 thousand people working in every field from the whole country,May 18th,2005 is an impressive day when the National Book Fair was held in Tianjin.During the National Book Fair,there were many activities such as opening ceremony,lectures of science and opportunities for readers to meet authers.What attracked people is that books talking about society and science,written for kids and teaching foreign languages could be bought during the National Book Fair.It was significant to hold the National Book Fair which could enrich our knowledge through offering good books and it was convinient to buy books.If more National Book Fairs should be held,the more interests we would enjoy.
2006年12月03日 12点12分 1
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The National Book Fair To more than 60 thousand people working in every field from the whole country,May 18th,2005 is an impressive day when the National Book Fair was held in Tianjin.During the National Book Fair,there were many activities such as opening ceremony,lectures of science and opportunities for readers to meet authe(o)rs.What attrac(t)ked people (was)is that books talking about society and science,written for kids and teaching foreign languages could be bought during the National Book Fair.It was significant to hold the National Book Fair which could enrich our knowledge through offering good books and it was conv(e)inient to buy books.If more National Book Fairs should be held,the more (interests we would enjoy.)(the more knowledge would be shared.)很好,22分,有几处拼写错误.结构和语言都没有大的问题.高级语法运用的很得当.
2006年12月04日 08点12分 2
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