06浙江Film or book, which do you prefer?Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original. Since seeing the film saves more times. Besides, the films which amused people are easier to be known.While, some others hold the view that in the original works included more details. Besides it’s in the original works that the language is elegant.My point of view on this matter is that the film and the original work both have their advantages and disadvantages. However with the development of the society, more and more forms of expression of art will come out. The more forms of expression of art come out, the more we have chances to enjoy art. Therefore I like both of them.“我的看法及理由”一定要写自己更喜欢哪一个吗？

05重庆改了一下： An Album or a Tape Every student loves his teacher. Which object can be used to express his thanks to the teacher? Before we graduated, our class decided to give a present to Miss Li loved by our class as a teacher. We discussed about giving Miss Li an album with every student's photo included or a tape which records all the wishes. What I preferred is that we should give Miss Li an album. I think as soon as she thinks of us she can view the album. Besides, the album can make her never forget our faces. Therefore I agreed the former. I wish Miss Li and we will remember the good times which we went through together forever.

Film or book, which do you prefer? Some of us think that it is better to see film(s) than to read book(s) in the original. Since seeing the film saves more time(s). Besides, the films which amuse(d) people are easier to be (well-known)known. While, some others hold the view that (in) the original works include(d) more details. Besides it’s in the original works that the language is elegant. My point of view on this matter is that the film and the original work(s) both have their advantages and disadvantages. However with the development of the society, more and more forms of expression of art will come out. The more forms of expression of art come out,(the more chances we will have to enjoy it) the more we have chances to enjoy art. Therefore I like both of them. 逻辑有些乱，括弧里有的东西应该添上，有的应该删掉，你应该能分辨出来

05重庆改了一下： An Album or a Tape Every student loves his teacher. Which object can be used to express his thanks to the teacher? Before we graduated, our class decided to give a present to Miss Li loved by our class as a teacher. We discussed about giving Miss Li an album with every student's photo included or a tape which records all the wishes. What I preferred is that we should give Miss Li an album. I think as soon as she thinks of us she can view the album. Besides, the album can make her never forget our faces. Therefore I agreed the former. I wish Miss Li and we will remember the good times which we went through together forever. 文章的内容先不提，这篇文章应该先写讨论的背景，你做的没错，然后你应该写有一部分同学提议应该送tape因为什么什么。。。然后写另一部分同学不同意送tape他们要送album，因为什么什么。。。最后写我同意谁的意见。还是逻辑上有问题。