Michael 我写了06山东的作文 麻烦批改 谢谢 On Sunday morning, LiMing and his grandpa were feeding the bird in the cage. Li Ming found the bird was angthing but delighted. He felt qiute strange. On his way to chool, across the sunny sky flew birds. He thought of the reason when he saw the birds. After school,he having gone to home, told his grandpa to give the bird free. He thought that bird needs friends.His grandpa agree that. LiMing, his grandpa and his friends went to field. LiMing opened the cage,the bird flew in the sky. What gay their were that no sooner had the bird flew in the sky than it found some friends. If they had given the bird free early , the bird wouldn't have felt lone. No one can deny that animals being our friends,deverve our protection.

On Sunday morning, LiMing and his grandpa were feeding the bird in the cage. Li Ming found the bird was an(y)gthing but delighted. He felt qiute strange. On his way to (s)chool. (A)cross the sunny sky flew birds. He thought of the reason when he saw the birds. After school,he having gone to home, told his grandpa to give(set) the bird free. He thought that the bird needs friends.His grandpa agree (with him). Li Ming, his grandpa and his friends went to field. LiMing opened the cage,the bird flew in the sky. What gay their(they) were that no sooner had the bird flew in the sky than it found some friends. If they had given(set) the bird free early , the bird wouldn't have felt lone(ly). No one can deny that animals being our friends,deverve our protection. 看到进步了,但是有低级的语法错误,这些是很影响老师对你作文的印象的19分,可能分数不高,但是你的错误好克服.另外有些高级语法用的不是很恰当.

Michael 非常谢谢你

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