暑假即将来临，你班同学讨论了假期计划，提出了不同看法。请根据提示写一篇有关讨论的英语短文，并谈谈你的看法。80-120，眼界-horizon 优点 缺点 待在家中 花费少，舒适方便 不能亲身了解外界 外出旅游 增长知识，开阔眼界 花费少，旅途不便 Just as the proverb says ,every coin has two sides. Some students plan to stay at home.Stayat home,offering comfot and convenience,cost little money.In spite of the fact that they can not feel the outside world by themselves. In addition,another students hold the view that they are going to travel .That will be a fantastic holiday.What delight is that we can study knowledge which is anything but seldom.Moreover,our horizon become more and more wider .The travel have an influence on negative.We will pay a large of money for this and we meet some trouble in holiday. No one can deny that both are reasonable.In my openion the former outweights the latter.It might be better if could economize some money. 麻烦大奇老师了。

Just as the proverb says ,every coin has two sides. Some students plan to stay at home.Stay(ing) at home,offering comfort and convenience,cost little money.In spite of the fact that they can not feel the outside world by themselves(这是半句话啊,应该还有个分句). In addition,another(other) students hold the view that they are going to travel .That will be a fantastic holiday.What delight (us) is that we can study (knowledge which is anything but seldom.看不懂)Moreover,our horizon become more and more wider.The travel have an influence on negative(on是介词后面应该加名词性的此句应为The travel have an negative influence on us).We will pay a large of money for this and meet some trouble in holiday. No one can deny that both are reasonable.In my opinion the former outweights the latter.It might be better if(if是连词,后面应接一个完整的句子,主语呢?) could economize some money. 看的出你看笔记了,但是你的基础有问题,犯了很多基础错误,高级语法也有用错的情况.并且还有字字对应翻译的痕迹.写句子时一定想写出的句子是否符合五种基本句型.17分