(Topic sentence)Every family has rules. Now I‘ll tell you about my rules at home. (Rule1)I can’t go out on school nights, 2 and I’m not allowed to play computer games even after I have finish my homework. 3 But the most terrible rule I have is that I have to go to bed before 9 o’clock. (comment)I used to finish my homework at school when I was a pupil, but now I am a middle school student, and usually have more homework to do. So I can’t finish it by 10 o’clock. (suggestion)I think I should be allowed to go to bed later, let’s say, by 11 o’clock.

(Topic)There are a lot of rules in our school. (Rule1)For example, we can’t eat in classrooms, 2and we are not allowed to bring mobile phones to school, and so on, I think most of them are good for us, but some are not, 3one of the rules I have most is that we have to wear school uniforms at school. (Comment)I think we should be allowed to wear our own clothes. It makes us feel happier. (Suggestion)If we can’t wear our own clothes at school, we should be allowed to design our school uniforms. It will make both teachers and students happy.

There are many rules in our school. Let me tell you about them with my own idea. First, we have to wear school uniforms every day. Then we can’t eat in classrooms. And we’re not allowed to bring mobile phones to school, either. About the third one, I’ve some different ideas. Although we don’t need mobile phones at school, Some of the students’ home are far away from school. They must let their parents know where they are after school. I think we should be allowed to bring it, but we can’t make any noise with it in class.I really hope that our school will agree with me. That’s good for both students and parents.

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There are so many things in our lives we should give thanks to. Such as the air, the sunshine,our lovely friends and dear teachers.But the people I mostly want to give thanks to are my parents.There are lots of stories about us.And now I'll tell you an incident that impressed me the most. Once when i was very young, my parents and I went boating.At first the waves were gentle but suddenly a huge wave turned my little boat over and i fell into the water.My mother got worried and jumped into the water quickly without hesitating.Everyone knew my mother could not swim.My father threw away everything he had in hands and jumped into the water quickly. My mother and I were saved at last.On the board,My mother kept asking me :Are you OK?I was very moved and I cried while she was hugging me. I'm growing in the sea of love. Dear my mother, thank you.You are the greatest woman in the world. Even if I collect all the carnations all over the world. I can't express my thanks to you ,my love to you:My mother. When i was in the kindergarden.My father liked to buy some chocolate for me.One day, i was eating happily.My father came in and i gave him a piece of it.My father said loudly:Oh!No!Honey,i don't like chocolate at all.Don't care about me .My little girl. I didn't really understand dad's words until I was in school.My dear father, you don't always mean what you said . You like chocolate but you love me more. My parents are the greates people in the world. I can't say how much I love you I don't know how much I love you. You are with me when me i am happy or sad. You sopport me in times of good or bad. But i can do noting for you.i just pray that my parents and all the parents around the world can have happy and healthy lives! sincerely, and another thanks!

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There are a lot of rules in our school. (Rule1)For example, we can’t eat in classrooms, 2and we are not allowed to bring mobile phones to school, and so on, I think most of them are good for us, but some are not, 3one of the rules I have most is that we have to wear school uniforms at school. (Comment)I think we should be allowed to wear our own clothes. It makes us feel happier. (Suggestion)If we can’t wear our own clothes at school, we should be allowed to design our school uniforms. It will make both teachers and students happy.