Recently our class have had a heated discussion on whether students should be allowed to go for a spring outing. We had different ideas. For details, please see below.Some of us believed that students should be allowed to go for a spring outing, because we can take enjoyment in the beautiful scenery such as lakes and mountains during the outing, which must be very interesting. Being close to the nature has a good effect on our health. What’s more, we can broaden our horizon of knowledge and learn much from the place we visit or the adventure we experienced. It is more than an outing.On the contrary, some argued that we students shouldn’t be allowed to go for a spring outing. The reason why it should be so is that the outing may be a waste of time and disperse our effort and even have a bad effect on our studies. Also, many students are too young to take care of themselves. It will result in accidents.To sum up, all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy, so we must combine exertion with rest. Only in this way can we get much more knowledge from our daily lives.

Recently our class have had a heated discussion on whether students should be allowed to go for a spring outing. We had different ideas. For details, please see below. Some of us believed that students should be allowed to go for a spring outing, because we can take enjoyment in the beautiful scenery such as lakes and mountains during the outing, which must be very interesting（interesting恶心,用joyful）. Being close to the nature has a good（good恶心，用positive） effect on our health. What’s more, we can broaden our horizon of knowledge and learn much from the place we visit or the adventure we experienced. It is more than an outing. On the contrary, some argued that we students shouldn’t be allowed to go for a spring outing. The reason why it should be so is that the outing may be a waste of time and disperse our effort and even have a bad(negative) effect on our studies. Also, many students are too young to take care of themselves. It will result in accidents. To sum up, all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy, so we must combine exertion with rest. Only in this way can we get much more knowledge from our daily lives. 非常好，２３分 ，逻辑清晰，句式多变，词汇丰富，高级语法使用恰当．字数是不是有些多．