奇哥，帮忙看看，期中考试的文，帮忙打个分数，谢谢！！！ Now,we have a heated discussion about whether students should search on the Internet .There are different opinions. Some people hold the view that students should do it.Thanksto searching on the Internet,we can make on-ling friends all over the world,and we can tell our thouhts to others.What'sbetter,it's good for learing English. On the other hand,others are against it.In the first place,it seems a waste of time,as a consequence,students prefer toplay e-games rather than study.It's harm to their future.Besides,some young children may be cheated. In my opinion,we should make full use of advantages of theInternet to learn more knowledge and enrich our eyes.再次感谢了阿

Now,we have a heated discussion about whether students should search on the Internet .There are different opinions. Some people hold the view that students should do it.Thanks to searching on the Internet,we can make on-ling friends all over the world,and we can tell our thouhts to others.What's better,it's good for learing English. On the other hand,others are against it.In the first place, it seems a waste of time,as a consequence,students prefer to play e-games rather than study.It's harm（ful） to their future. Besides,some young children may be cheated. In my opinion,we should make full use of advantages of the Internet to learn more knowledge and enrich our eyes. 流畅，但是有一些俗词，整体感觉没有发挥你的水平，２０分