06四川Dear Nick,I’m glad to hear that you’re coming to Sichuan in August.In Sichuan you will see many scenic spots which are well known all over the world. Jiuzhaigou is one of the most famous places in Sichuan Province. The lakes, which have many kinds of colors, are so clear that you can see their bottoms.The most renowned cultural scenic spots in Sichuan is Dujiangyan Irrigation Project which was built more than 2000 years ago, however it is still been used now.In August there is a mild climate in Sichuan, more over the transportation there is convenient.Look forward to your coming.Yours sincerely,Li Hua

Dear Nick, I’m glad to hear that you’re coming to Sichuan in August. In Sichuan you will see many scenic spots which are well known all over the world. Jiuzhaigou is one of the most famous places in Sichuan Province. The lakes, which have many kinds of colors, are so clear that you can see their bottoms. The most renowned cultural scenic spots in Sichuan is Dujiangyan Irrigation Project which was built more than 2000 years ago, however it is still been(being) used now. In August there is a mild climate in Sichuan, more　over（moreover） the transportation there is convenient. Look forward to your coming. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 这篇就看出进步了，小错误减少了很多．注意时态的形式．