主题：　　　Should senior school student's have classes in holidays? We hold the view that senior school student's should not have classes in holidays. First and foremost,having been paying much attention to study,senior school students had hardly opportunity to take part in interest activitics from which we can learn a lot while relaxing ourselves.A part time job being a good form of social practice,can sunely help the students make extraordinary progress in both knowledge and ability.As amatter of fact,what is learned in books can't have the same deep effect on us as what is learned thwugh experisnce. Last but not least,No one can deny that a good rest in holidays makes study more effective during the coming study life.As far as I concerned,Were the students not have classes in holidays,they could live a far more significance life.刘老师您好：　　　我是您特训班的学生，初次写文请多谅解烦您评个分．

Should senior school student's have classes in holidays? We hold the view that senior school student's（students'） should not have classes in holidays. First and foremost,having been paying much attention to study,senior school students had hardly opportunity to take part in interest activitic(e)s from which we can learn a lot(from) while relaxing ourselves.A part time job being a good form of social practice,can sun(r)ely help the students make extraordinary progress in both knowledge and ability.As a matter of fact,what is learned in books can't have the same deep effect on us as what is learned thwugh(through) experisnce(experiences). Last but not least,No one can deny that a good rest in holidays makes study more effective during the coming study life.As far as I concerned,Were the students not have classes in holidays,they could live a far more significance(significant) life.你的题目没有给俺啊，所以不好评分．就初次写作来说，相当不错了．