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非常感谢Dear Fred,How are you getting on with your studies? The winter holiday is coming. We are go to on our exciting travel. Firstly,we spend three days in BeiJing. In BeiJing stands some famous constructions, such as the Great Wall,the Summer Place, the Imperial Palace, TianTan and so on. Then we are to having gone to Xi'an by train, visite Qin terracotta soldiers.Besides, we are going to watch the propect of the sea and eat delicious seafood in ShangHai by airplane. What delights us is that we are going to arrive in GuiLin. Because GuiLin, as all may know, has the finest mountains and water under heaven.What's better, we finish our travel off. You are invited to spend the Spring Festival with our family. If you had gone to the travel, you would get a better understanding of Chinese traditional culture. No one can deny that you well have a gay holiday.Best wishes! yours, LiHua 

We are go to on our exciting travel.你自己说这句子有问题吗？！

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Dear Fred, How are you getting on with your studies? The winter holiday is coming. We are go（ing） to have an exciting travelling. Firstly,we spend three days in BeiJing. In BeiJing stand(加s吗)s some famous constructions, such as the Great Wall,the Summer Place, the Imperial Palace, TianTan and so on. Then we are to go to Xi'an by train, visiting Qin terracotta soldiers.Besides, we are going to watch the propect(ion) of the sea and eat delicious seafood in ShangHai by airplane. What delights us is that we are going to arrive in GuiLin. Because GuiLin, as all may know, has the finest mountains and water under heaven.What's better, we finish our travel off. You are invited to spend the Spring Festival with our family. If you had gone to the travel, you would get a better understanding of Chinese traditional culture. No one can deny that you w(i)ll have a gay(relaxing) holiday. 这种作文不如命题作文有意义．语言还可以．还是写真题吧．Best wishes! yours, LiHua

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