06重庆Dear David:During my searching the Internet, I saw your notice that you want to make friends with Chinese.I’m glad to make friend with you. Knowing that you want to learn the language of China and the Chinese culture, I think I can help you. I hope that we send e-mail constantly with each other, in which I can tell you something about Chinese culture. In the same way, you can ask me any question. Moreover, in holidays I expected your coming to China, and I will give you warm welcome.Looking forward to your reply.Yours May

Dear David: During my searching the Internet, I saw your notice that you want to make friends with Chinese. I’m glad to make friend(s) with you. Knowing that you want to learn the language of China(直接说chinese不完了吗) and the Chinese culture, I think I can help you. I hope that we can send e-mail(s) constantly with each other, in which I can tell you something about Chinese culture. In the same way, you can ask me any question(s). Moreover, in holidays I expected your coming to China, and I will give you warm welcome. Looking forward to your reply. Yours May 小错误不断啊,整体逻辑性还可以提高,相比自己开始写的文章看看,有什么感觉?

觉得还是没有明显提高，月考两次了，作文都是15分。不过，多写就会发现自己的问题。以前都不会用复合句，现在就慢慢会了，以前作文都不注意时抬语态什么的，现在也有意识要检查这些地方。呵呵，谢谢老师。

进步是走楼梯，不是坐电梯．