06广东Many years ago, the communication between people was nothing but difficult. Most people wrote letters to communicate with families and friends, which took too long time. Maybe in some places there was a public telephone, but it is also not convenient.But now, most people have the mobile phone. It just for one person can be hold everywhere. Thanks to the mobile phone you can communicate with a person wherever he go. The Internet is convenient as well. However far the distance is, you can watch the person as talk with him on the Internet. Maybe it can make a person who live alone in the foreign country don’t feel lonely.

Maybe in some places there was a public telephone, but it is also not convenient.时态问题

Thanks to the mobile phone you can communicate with a person wherever he go.是不是goes啊？

Many years ago, the communication between people was nothing but difficult. Most people wrote letters to communicate with families and friends, which took too long time. Maybe in some places there was a public telephone, but it is(was) also not convenient. But now, most people have mobile phones. It(此句不对,想说什么) just for one person can be hold everywhere. Thanks to the mobile phone you can communicate with a person wherever he go.(三单) The Internet is convenient as well. However far the distance is, you can watch the person as talk with him on the Internet. Maybe it can make a person who live(三单) alone in the foreign country don’t(not) feel lonely. 20分最多了,低级错误太多.