群里的各位December大家好。
先简单介绍一下自己，我是一名大一党，
喜欢Declan也有些年头了，早些年在FOD出没，对Declan也算了解吧。
在Declan中文论坛，翻译了declan18岁的生日贴，declan为纪念生日写的一个文。。
其实在Declan论坛呆的时间比较长，所以不常来贴吧，就算来呢，也是潜水。
大学轻松了许多，空闲时间多了，就愿意多来贴吧逛逛，摆脱潜水一族。
这个文呢，也算是给大家的一个见面礼。是我的一篇英语作文，
写的不敢说天衣无缝，但是写出了真实情感。写出了我作为一个December对Declan的热爱。
自认为写的看得过去，特请各位共赏，当然了肯定不如贴吧的英语大人们了，那您就图个乐，顺便多提宝贵意见！（本人打字慢，请勿插楼）

文章中文大意：
本文是一篇故事文，基本为虚构
叙事视角以第三人称为主
讲述了一个Declan（一个来自天国的小天使）来到地球为人们排忧解难的过程
其中，Declan努力给了地球人们快乐和爱，然而却一度被人们误解
最终的一件事，Declan使得人们懂得了爱的真谛。Declan也成为了名符其实的传递爱的天使

What we need is love
Declan walked out of the house gently.“I have been here for 3 times.The first time i brought men and women,and i told them to live together.The second time i brought them food,and i taught them to plant rice.This time i brought them laughter.People here have owned everything they need."He thought happily.
"Now, go away. We don't wanna see you anymore."One of the villagers said to Declan."Go away.We don't need your help anymore."another said."What have I done?I helped you a lot.You shouldn't have said these to me.Now that you don't wanna see me anymore,i'll go."Then,a bright lightening appeared...


It was in the year 2500.The earth was polluted seriously.Slowly people began to dieand cities began to disappear.These has touched the God heavily.I mean,the real God,The one who has been living in the heaven for more than 25000years. so the God held a competition.The God wanted to ask the best angel to help the people.Ofcourse Decan was the Winner."Now,my son,go and help the people.You are the hero,and you are the one who can bring them happiness.I'm sure you can do it."So the God created a new land.It was really beautiful.It was the last unpolluted area on the earth.
Then,DEClan set off.Declan flew to a small village."Oh,my ,people there are really poor.Most them are seriously ill.I wanna help them.""People,follw me.,I'll help you."Then,he brought them to the land the God created."From now on,you all need to live in this new village.You all need tolive happily.Then,Declan flew away.People began their new life.They adapted to the new environment.And they learned to help each other.


简介有点狗血...

Soon they had new families.
Several days later,Declan came again."Good job!You all had your families.NOw i'll give you some seeds and you need to learn to plant.You need to supply yourselves."THen,Declan taught them some planting skills.Declan disappeared again.People soon planted theie rice.they became healthy and wealthy.
One month went by.Declan came here for the third time.This time he brought them lots of books,and asked them to smile everyday.He told jokes and the villagers laughed happily.
One evening,Declan walked out of the house gently."I have been here for 3 times.The first time i brought men and women,and i told them to live together.The second time i brought them food,and i taught them to plant rice.This time i brought them laughter.People here have owned everything they need."He thought happily.
"NO.THEY STILL NEED SOMETHING"The God's voice appeared in his mind.

Then the next moring,Declan was extremely sad and confused.I have done a lot for them ,why did they treat me like this!!I could hardly believe this."Now go away, we don't wanna see you anymore."Declan's eyes are full of tears."Fine then i'll go,and i'll never come back."Suddenly,a bright lightening strike the ground heavily.
A MONSTER APPEARED.
"HA...Stupid human beings.I'm hungry and i wanna eat all of you."The monster said,with it's mouth wide open.some of the women cried and some children ran away quikly.But IT's in vain.The Monster soon seized several of the villagers."NO way,you couldn't escape.NIce starters,ha?"Just then, Declan said to the villagers"Don't worry everyone.Calm down.everyone has his weaks.We'll win and nobody would die."He created a shelter and asked everyone to go into it."WHAT WE NEED IS LOVE.That's the most important thing we need.Love is the most powerful weapon.If we love everyone,we'll win and get everything we want.The villagers nodded.So they became brave,and When some want to give up ,the others woule cheer them up.
"YOU HAVE BEEN FIGHTING BRAVELY,BUT IN VAIN>"OH <NO>.What are you doing??WHat's
wrong with my body."The monster's body broke slowly."HOW COME?""You shouldn't have gained such powerful weapon.""LOVE IS OUR WEAPON AND WE CAN DEFEAT EVERYTHING.The villagers responded together.Finally the Monster disappeared.And to everyone's great surprise,The God appeared."People,you have won.And Declan was brilliant,isn't he?"WEll.The monster is the spirit of the devil.And he took advantage of your selfishness.Since you have abandoned your selfishness,The monster Disappeared.And always remember,Love is the most powerful weapon ,is's also the most beautiful thing.Love can build a bridge,Between your heart and mine.ALWAYS REMEMBER: WHAT WE NEED IS LOVE.
Yes,what we need is love.The villagers said. Then the God and Declan flew away.
From then on, The earth became clean and beautiful again,and people became happier.they led a happy life.DEClAN,of course,became the most famous angel in the heaven.

文笔不是很好，但是觉得各位能看下去。。。
这是一个倒叙，插叙兼有的故事。。。
欢迎各位多提宝贵意见！
同时，我想说，支持Declan是我们每个December应尽的责任和义务！
让我们一起支持Declan！谢谢

这个是倒序的一种，或者说是半倒叙版插叙的一种O(∩_∩)O

这个剧情好可爱。。。

就是说在文章最开头先提一下后边会发生的事，然后再顺着文章的结构写下来。
有些小说的确是这么写的。。。

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楼主万岁…

手机屏幕满满都是英文…有种做英语阅读理解的感脚…完了…眼睛都看花了…

用英语写文章的人果然很强大...又回到了阅读理解的感觉了啊...

慢慢看…用英语写文章的都很强大的说，而且设想很可爱～

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