06辽宁Li Ming’s grandfather was kept a bird in the cage. The other day Li Ming who was seeing the bird asked grandfather why the bird isn’t cheerful. Li Ming’s grandfather had no idea what to say. The next day on his way to school Li Ming saw several birds flying happily across the sky. He thought of his grandfather’s bird kept in the cage should like them. As soon as he got home he told his grandfather the bird also need friend. His grandfather agreed with him. So they went to the field and made the bird free. It is the other two children that seeing the sight also felt merry.

Li Ming’s grandfather was kept(这是被动,他爸爸被养吗?崩溃了) a bird in the cage. The other day Li Ming who was seeing the bird asked grandfather why the bird isn’t cheerful. Li Ming’s grandfather had no idea what to say. The next day on his way to school Li Ming saw several birds flying happily across the sky. He thought of his grandfather’s bird kept in the cage should like them(指什么?用复数吗?). As soon as he got home he told his grandfather the bird also need friend(可数名词单数不能裸奔). His grandfather agreed with him. So they went to the field and made(改为set) the bird free. It is the other two children that seeing the sight also felt merry.(是强调句吗?去掉it,is,that后剩下的还是一句话吗?谓语动词能是seeing 吗?) 比你从前写的有进步但是还是小错太多,注意句子结构和词性搭配.

知道了，谢谢

like them指像它们一样最后一句改为It is the other two children that who seeing the sight also felt merry.行吗？

你是在用强调句把那么把it is that 去掉剩下The other two children who(从句中的动词呢?) seeing the sight also felt merry.

sodisna,谢谢。