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作文:假设你是主持人,请你根据一下表格的信息,以"Should we give money to beggars?"为题的班会写一个总结一些人:孤寡老人不能自食其力而乞讨,有些学生因家境贫苦而辍学,有些残疾人只能以乞讨为生另一些人:大部分都是假装的,乞讨只是他们赚钱的一条捷径,这么做会助长懒惰结论:应该尽力帮助弱势群体,但给钱时一定要谨慎我的作文:帮忙看看,再打个分 We have had a class meeting today on whether we should give money to beggars and we have different opinions. An oriental philopher said that every coin has its two sides.That is to say there is no agreement among th people.Some supports that we should give money to beggars.The old cannot earn the money with the efforts of them.Some students have to beg because the poor of their families.We cannot help the disabled man more,so they have to.Others,taking the oppsite stand,firmly believe that the beggars should not be given money.The first reason is that most of them are not the real beggar.Then beg is a way of earning money for them.Last but not the least,it will make them more lazier. Despite the discussion,we make the conclusion,we should try our best to help the inferior group,though we must careful while giving money.
2006年10月07日 13点10分 1
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We have had a class meeting today on whether we should give money to beggars and we have different opinions. An oriental philopher(拼写错误) said that every coin has two sides.That is to say, there is no agreement among th people.Some supports(用三单吗) that we should give money to beggars.The old cannot earn the money with the efforts of them.Some students have to beg because the poor of their families.We cannot help the disabled man more,so they have to.Others,taking the oppsite stand,firmly believe that the beggars should not be given money.The first reason is that most of them are not the real beggar(复数).Then beg(用名词) is a way of earning money for them.Last but not the least,it will make them more lazier. Despite the discussion,we make the conclusion,(逗号不能连接独立分句,是同位语从句吧,加that)we should try our best to help the inferior group,though we must(be) careful while giving money.小错太多了.
2006年10月08日 01点10分 2
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严格说20分算多的.
2006年10月08日 01点10分 3
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