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这是我们月考的作文,题目是是否要给乞丐钱,帮忙看一下顺便
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,谢谢!!! We have had a class meeting today on whether we should give money to beggars and we have different opinions. Some students hold the view that we should give money to beggars.Firstly,the old without homes have no ability to make a living.Secondly,some students are too poor to afford the high price for school,so that they have to beg for money.What's worse,begging is the only way for the people who are disabled to live on. On the other hand,others hold the oppsite view about it.Theythink that they are not real beggars,and they choose begging to make money easily.If we help them,as a consequence,they will become lazier. In a word,we should try our best to help inferior group after thinking twice.
2006年10月06日 14点10分 1
level 6
问一下“帮助他们等于助长了懒惰”可不可以写成Helping them is equal to heipng laziness.老师说这有点中文式的英语,怎么才能把这句话写地道?还有be equal to怎么用比较好??
2006年10月06日 14点10分 2
level 7
我看了,没什么可以大改动的,不过什么firstly,secondly是不是可以用高级词汇替换,我讲过的.Their laziness,to some extent, comes from our helping.
2006年10月07日 13点10分 3
level 7
be equal to其实就是用在表示相等的时候啊.to是介词.
2006年10月07日 13点10分 4
level 6
谢谢,真是麻烦了,那那那那那那那那大概能得多少分?
2006年10月08日 04点10分 5
level 7
21,22分
2006年10月09日 01点10分 6
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