【伪文艺升级】Song of Myself翻译
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kris梦年 楼主
本来想写个古风翻译,结果成了酱油诗翻译。。
好歹为了它忙活了一阵,表拍砖。。
2012年01月15日 04点01分 1
level 10
- -把哪个部分是哪个人唱的写出来吧。。
2012年01月15日 04点01分 2
level 11
kris梦年 楼主
尼玛度娘又犯毛病了。。发不了啊。。
2012年01月15日 04点01分 3
翻译成诗是挺艺术的,但后面的诵读感觉,翻译成诗就却少了宏大的感觉。个人还是希望能尊重原著。虽然翻译成诗也没错。
2012年09月24日 06点09分
回复 Blackcathb :也没人拦着你尊重原著啊
2012年09月24日 09点09分
属刺猬的。我要会翻还用看你的帖子了。****YOU。
2012年09月24日 12点09分
level 11
kris梦年 楼主
Song Of Myself 吾心之歌
1. From A Dusty Bookshelf
岁月悠悠等闲度
2. All That Great Heart Lying Still
丹心依依未曾灭
The nightingale is still locked in the cage
笼中羁鸟锁更深
The deep breath I took still poisons my lungs
深吐毒气仍压抑
An old oak sheltering me from the blue
古树苦撑抚吾心
Sun bathing on its dead frozen leaves
枝散叶乱光影错
A catnap in the ghost town of my heart
梦起灵乡心小憩
She dreams of storytime and the river ghosts
路遇怪诞过神鬼
Of mermaids, of Whitman`s and the Ride
奇异非常渐次现
Raving harlequins, gigantic toys
帷幕微起初登场
A song of me a song in need
吾心之歌,吾爱之歌
Of a courageous symphony
恢弘志气与同行
A verse of me a verse in need
吾心之诗,吾爱之诗
Of a pure-heart singing me to peace
须臾沉吟还心宁
All that great heart lying still and slowly dying
鸿鹄志,何曾灭,奈何世事空悲切
All that great heart lying still on an angelwing
白翼间,青云巅,年少丹心难再现
All that great heart lying still
青云壮志应犹在
In silent suffering
静默冷寂苦难艰
Smiling like a clown until the show has come to an end
强颜欢笑众人前
What is left for encore
人后血泪还素颜
Is the same old Dead Boy`s song
亡灵歌谣今再现
Sung in silence
轻声吟咏无人晓
All that great heart lying still and slowly dying
鸿鹄志,何曾灭,奈何世事空悲切
All that great heart lying still on an angelwing
白翼间,青云巅,年少丹心难再现
A midnight flight into Covington Woods
午夜飞行草木间
A princess and a panther by my side
红颜相伴野兽随
These are Territories I live for
身离故土魂魄在
I`d still give my everything to love you more
只愿守护尽余生
2012年01月15日 04点01分 4
level 11
kris梦年 楼主
3. Piano Black
沉沉天空如墨黑
A silent symphony
寂静音符跳脱起
A hollow opus #1,2,3
失魂乐章难再拟
Sometimes the sky is piano black
天空阴翳如泼墨
Piano black over cleansing waters
墨黑渲染光阴蔽
Resting pipes, verse of bore
烟气袅袅诗无心
Rusting keys without a door
花花世界路难觅
Sometimes the sky is piano black
天空阴翳如泼墨
Piano black over cleansing waters
墨黑渲染光阴蔽
All that great heart lying still and slowly dying
鸿鹄志,何曾灭,奈何世事空悲切
All that great heart lying still on an angelwing
白翼间,青云巅,年少丹心难再现
2012年01月15日 04点01分 5
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kris梦年 楼主
4. Love
爱之深深深几许
I see a slow, simple youngster by a busy street, with a begging bowl in his shaking hand.
青涩少年,至微至陋,独自乞讨,摇摇欲坠
Trying to smile but hurting infinitely. Nobody notices.
身心皆伤,无人知晓
I do, but walk by.
唯余独见,却做不闻
An old man gets naked and kisses a model-doll in his attic.
花甲老翁,褪尽伪装,手捧布偶,深吻其上
It`s half-light and he`s in tears.
日影斑驳,热泪盈眶
When he finally comes his eyes are cascading.
泪水无言,流尽此生
I see a beaten dog in a pungent alley. He tries to bite me.
陡峭山谷,凄寂幽冷,落荒之犬,垂死挣扎
All pride has left his wild drooling eyes.
野性不再,目光失焦
I wish I had my leg to spare.
望其萎靡,愿以身易
A mother visits her son, smiles to him through the bars.
重重阻隔,真爱不移
She`s never loved him more.
母子情深,微笑依旧
An obese girl enters an elevator with me.
摩登女郎,相貌平平,浓妆艳抹,与吾同行
All dressed up fancy, a green butterfly on her neck.
衣着鲜亮,文身颈上
Terribly sweet perfume deafens me.
香气逼人,吾心倾醉
She`s going to dinner alone.
孑然一身,锦衣夜行
That makes her even more beautiful.
傲然凌人,无与伦比
I see a model`s face on a brick wall.
冷漠人像,无悲无喜
A statue of porcelain perfection beside a violent city kill.
杀戮和平,一线之隔
A city that worships flesh.
残酷都市,踏血前行

2012年01月15日 04点01分 6
level 11
kris梦年 楼主
The 1st thing I ever heard was a wandering man telling his story
世间万事未知晓
It was you, the grass under my bare feet
初闻情切如斯,恰似足下青翠之鲜草
The campfire in the dead of the night
死寂黑夜之篝火
The heavenly black of sky and sea
天色黯淡,海景失魂
It was us
一如你我
Roaming the rainy roads, combing the gilded beaches
幽静雨巷间,鎏金沙滩边
Waking up to a new gallery of wonders every morn
日出日暮,惟四时之景相伴
Bathing in places no-one`s seen before
尝求无人圣迹
Shipwrecked on some matt-painted island
奈何中道没落
Clad in nothing but the surf - beauty`s finest robe
摄魂之美,隐于无形
Beyond all mortality we are, swinging in the breath of nature
蜉蝣一生,唯余茫茫心荡漾
In early air of the dawn of life
朝气清冽
A sight to silence the heavens
寂静天堂由心生
I want to travel where life travels, following its permanent lead
但求心之所向,身之所及
Where the air tastes like snow music
空气清冷,冰清玉洁
Where grass smells like fresh-born Eden
音似阳春之白雪,青青绿草如新生
I would pass no man, no stranger, no tragedy or rapture
但求隔阂不再,戒心无存
I would bathe in a world of sensation
率性善美,真爱无邪
Love, Goodness, and Simplicity ( While violated and imprisoned by technology )
纵系现实之重负,单纯天真如孩童 The thought of my family`s graves was the only moment I used to experience true love
思及故人,余生唯此念真爱
That love remains infinite, as I`ll never be the man my father is
此爱无终,深感难与慈父同
How can you "just be yourself" when you don`t know who you are?
不知吾心,悲喜谁人享
Stop saying "I know how you feel"
何谈身受与感同
How could anyone know how another feels?
何人心神与吾通
Who am I to judge a priest, beggar, whore, politician, wrongdoer?
对错善恶谁定夺
I am, you are, all of them already
世间凡人难逃脱
Dear child, stop working, go play
吾之爱子,休憩片刻,前路漫漫,童真难再回
Forget every rule
规矩方圆莫须有
There`s no fear in a dream
梦中亦无惊惧存
"Is there a village inside this snowflake?"
雪花一片,别有洞天焉?
- a child asked me
稚嫩孩童于我问
"What`s the color of our lullaby?"
睡前歌谣为何色?
I`ve never been so close to truth as then
初触平生实
I touched its silver lining
渐露影后事
Death is the winner in any war
战死沙场才英雄
Nothing noble in dying for your religion
岂知临终皆狼狈
For your country
为国为家徒添憾
For ideology, for faith
为梦为想守空名
For another man, yes
唯余故人存心间
Paper is dead without words
纸落无字留
Ink idle without a poem
墨干诗亦失
All the world dead without stories
世事隐匿无踪迹
Without love and disarming beauty
常念往事思无邪
Careless realism costs souls
现实苦涩徒伤悲
Ever seen the Lord smile?
神之微笑不曾见
All the care for the world made Beautiful a sad man?
只知关心成叹息
Why do we still carry a device of torture around our necks?
艰险犹在如窒息
Oh, how rotten your pre-apocalypse is
破落预言未成真
All you bible-black fools living over nightmare ground
何苦忧心不洒脱
I see all those empty cradles and wonder
此生琢磨终无果
If man will ever change
漫漫人生,命运无常可曾变
I, too, wish to be a decent manboy but all I am
尝求夙愿终无果
Is smoke and mirrors
徒增烟雾扰心神
Still given everything, may I be deserving
但求所得亦所愿
And there forever remains that change from G to Em
音韵犹伴吾心存
2012年01月15日 04点01分 7
level 14
[睡觉]
2012年01月15日 08点01分 8
level 10
好文采
2012年01月15日 08点01分 9
level 14
2012年01月15日 08点01分 10
level 11
[顶]
2012年01月15日 08点01分 11
level 9
真厉害……
2012年01月15日 10点01分 12
level 13
[睡觉]我很想笑
2012年01月15日 11点01分 13
level 11
强贴留名~
2012年01月15日 12点01分 14
level 11
kris梦年 楼主
[囧] 为啥啊。。
2012年01月15日 12点01分 15
level 13
[大笑]看到古风就想笑
2012年01月15日 13点01分 16
level 11
kris梦年 楼主
不要用这么犀利的眼神看我。。
2012年01月15日 13点01分 17
level 11
kris梦年 楼主
笑得真夸张。。
还有这不是古风 像打油诗
2012年01月15日 13点01分 18
level 14
不会灼伤皮肤放心吧[睡觉]
2012年01月15日 14点01分 19
level 11
[顶]我看我们都可以弄个新专古风版再唱出来了....
2012年01月15日 16点01分 20
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