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06全国ⅡDear Sir / Madam,My name is Li Hua. I would like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Asian Games.I being a girl am seventeen years old. Now I am studying in a senior school.My English is good, and I enjoy doing all kinds of sports. What I like to do was that communicating with others and being glad to help everyone. Another advantage of mine is that I know the situation in this place which I lived in for a long time. So I apply for the volunteer for the Winter Asian Games.If you choose me to be the volunteer, I can promise to supply the best serve. Yours faithfully,Li Hua
2006年09月30日 14点09分 1
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My name is Li Hua. I would like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Asian Games. (看着)I am a seventeen-year-old girl.(这样是对的,那样语法正确,但是没有那么用的) Now I am studying in a senior school. My English is good, and I enjoy doing all kinds of sports. What I like to do was(is) that(这里要加一个完整的句子!!!) communicating with others and being glad to help everyone. Another advantage of mine is that I know the situation in this place which I lived in for a long time. So I apply for the volunteer for the Winter Asian Games. If you choose me to be the volunteer, I can promise to supply the best serve(service应该用名词). Yours faithfully, Li Hua 你要仔细看笔记进行模仿,用词时要分清词性!
2006年10月03日 15点10分 2
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