Dear Sir, My name is Li Hua.I would like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Asian Games.Born in 1989,I am a boy loving sports.Student of a senior middle school as I am,I'd like to give everyone a hand when they have troubles.I am good at comunicating and why I can comunicate with foreigners well is that I can speak a fluent English.What's more,I've lived here for 17 years so that I am familiar with the condition of our city.In a word,if I would be a volunteer,I would offer the best service with all I can do. Your faithfully, Li Hua

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Dear Sir, My name is Li Hua.I would like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Asian Games.Born in 1989,I am a boy loving sports.Student of a senior middle school as I am,I'd like to give everyone a hand when they have troubles.I am good at comunicating and (the reason) why I can comunicate with foreigners well is that I can speak fluent English.What's more,I've lived here for 17 years so that I am familiar with the condition of our city.In a word,if I (should) be a volunteer,I would offer the best service with all (that) I can do. Your faithfully, Li Hua 二十五分以上,注意细节.

谢谢,我会多注意的