Michael 我写了2006年陕西卷的作文（讨论假期旅行还是在家）麻烦你批改 谢谢！Just as the proverb gose that evey coin has two sides. Some students hold the view that we should stay at home during the summer holiday. Because staying at home is both comfertable and comvient. And it is nothing but economical. Not only they go to trip could they personally know the natural knowledges. If they shouldn't travel, they wouldn't learn much history of the place they visit. While other students take the opposite stand. With the development of living standards,traving is becoming increasingly popular with many people. Having been liked by people, traving makes us to know the custom of the local people. What delighted us was that we enjoy the beautiful scenery. But traving is anything but economical and comfortable. Reasonable as the former is seems, I perfer the later.I may have read and heard about something but never I can get a deep understanding of it until I see it for myself. 

Just as the proverb gose that evey coin has two sides. Some students hold the view that we should stay at home during the summer holiday. Because staying at home is both comfortable and comvient(拼写错误). And it is nothing but economical.(去掉not) Only they go to trip could they personally know the natural knowledges. If they shouldn't travel, they wouldn't learn much history of the place they visit. While other students take the opposite stand. With the development of living standards,traveling is becoming increasingly popular with many people. Having been liked by people, travling makes us to know the custom of the local people. What delighted us was that we enjoy the beautiful scenery. But travling is anything but economical and comfortable. Reasonable as the former is(去掉is)seems, I perfer the later.I may have read and heard about something but never(应该用倒装can I) I can get a deep understanding of it until I see it for myself.