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05全国(二)Just as the proverb goes that every coin has two sides.There is no agreement among students.Some students hold the view that the plan to move the zoo park to another place shouldn't be practiced.What they believed is that the park was built in1906,and was famours under the sun.What's worse, the animals would to die in the transportion.While other students take the opposite stand.If the park were to move,it would be anything but easy for the park to solve the problem.It was the reason why the traffic jam that the tourists were fairly major.And the good environment of the suburb will be beneficial to the animals' life.There is a lot to be said for both sides.Reasonable as the former seems I prefer the latter.
2006年09月19日 13点09分 1
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Just as the proverb goes that every coin has two sides. There is no agreement among students. Some students hold the view that the plan to move the zoo park to another place shouldn't be practiced.What they believed is that the park was built in1906,and was famours under the sun.What's worse, the animals would (would后加动词原形) die in the transportion. While other students take the opposite stand. If the park were to move,it would be anything but easy for the park to solve the problem.It was the reason why the traffic jam that the tourists were fairly major.(上一句看不懂)And the good environment of the suburb will be beneficial to the animals' life. There is a lot to be said for both sides. Reasonable as the former seems I prefer the latter总体不错,笔记掌握的不错,20分以上
2006年09月19日 14点09分 2
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艾艾的NANA 楼主
谢谢。笔记的东西当然要学以至用了。It was the reason why the traffic jam that the tourists were fairly major. (上一句看不懂)本是想说“由于游客数量过多而引起的交通堵塞”。
2006年09月22日 16点09分 3
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The large number of the tourists lead to the traffic jam.
2006年09月25日 05点09分 4
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