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Story of a Tree Once there was a family living in a cabin under a tree.Because of it ,the wind couldn't blow it down.Not long after ,a man,having been cut down the tree,wanted to bulid a new cabin near it.There's no trees from then on.Not far from the old cabin,stood their new cabin.It was made up of the wood from the tree.Unexpectly,as a consqent of the strong wind ,the two cabins were both destoried.The man and the woman felt very sad .What am I belief is that we can't live without trees.The more trees grown,the better life we live.
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北京市将举办主题为“Protecting Mother Earth”的中学生英语作文竞赛。你准备根据下列四幅图画写一篇“Story Of a Tree”的英语小故事参赛。注意:1.词数100左右。2.开头已为你写好。Story of a Tree Once there was a family living in a cabin(小木屋)under a huge tree
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Story of a Tree Once there was a family living in a cabin under a tree. Because of it ,the wind couldn't blow it down.Not long after ,a man,having been(不用被动) cut down the tree,wanted to bulid a new cabin near it.There's no trees from then on.Not far from the old cabin,stood their new cabin.It was made up of the wood from the tree.Unexpectly,as a consqence(是这个拼写) of the strong wind ,the two cabins were both destoried.The man and the woman felt very sad .What I believe(改成这样) is that we can't live without trees.The more trees grown,the better life we live. 不觉得可以用虚拟和转折吗?总体可以.
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