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嘿嘿,还是作文,经过上次你说写得不是很好,我可是郁闷了一小下呢,不过还是要在你的指导与带领之下继续练习写,其实那篇我也知道写得不好,我就是想知道一下安我们那老师写得能好到哪去。Dear Catherine,I'm very glad to receive your letter.In the last letter,you asked me a question that what would do on Mother's Day and what should you do ,so let me give you some suggestion about it. Mum,as we all know,is one of the most intimate and great person in our life,whom gives birth to us,as well as she takes care of us all the time.As a consequence,we should try our best to do something to reply her for her love and care from childhood. So what shall do?Firstly,I plan to help her do some houseworkwhich I can do on my own,so that my dear mummy can enjoy a cosy rest.Secondly,if I have enough pocletmoney,I'll purchas a lovelyand meaningful present for her,or I can make one merely by myself.What's more,I'll write a card which is full of my wishes to her.I wish that she would keep young all her life. OK,that's all.Have you got other ideas?Look to your reply.Best wishes. Yours帮忙往高分作文上改改,嘿嘿谢谢了,如果真的写得不好奇哥可以好好的批评,顺便打一下分
2006年09月10日 15点09分
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