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嘿嘿,还是作文,经过上次你说写得不是很好,我可是郁闷了一小下呢,不过还是要在你的指导与带领之下继续练习写,其实那篇我也知道写得不好,我就是想知道一下安我们那老师写得能好到哪去。Dear Catherine,I'm very glad to receive your letter.In the last letter,you asked me a question that what would do on Mother's Day and what should you do ,so let me give you some suggestion about it. Mum,as we all know,is one of the most intimate and great person in our life,whom gives birth to us,as well as she takes care of us all the time.As a consequence,we should try our best to do something to reply her for her love and care from childhood. So what shall do?Firstly,I plan to help her do some houseworkwhich I can do on my own,so that my dear mummy can enjoy a cosy rest.Secondly,if I have enough pocletmoney,I'll purchas a lovelyand meaningful present for her,or I can make one merely by myself.What's more,I'll write a card which is full of my wishes to her.I wish that she would keep young all her life. OK,that's all.Have you got other ideas?Look to your reply.Best wishes. Yours帮忙往高分作文上改改,嘿嘿谢谢了,如果真的写得不好奇哥可以好好的批评,顺便打一下分
2006年09月10日 15点09分 1
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Dear Catherine, I'm very glad to receive your letter.In the last letter,you asked me a question that what would you do on Mother's Day and what should you do ,so let me give you some suggestions about it. Mum,as we all know,is one of the most intimate and great person in our life,who gave birth to us,as well as she takes care of us all the time.As a consequence,we should try our best to do something to reply her for her love and care from childhood. So what shall do?Firstly,I plan to help her do some housework which I can do on my own,so that my dear mummy can enjoy a cosy rest.Secondly,if I have enough pocketmoney,I'll purchase a lovely and meaningful present for her,or I can make one merely by myself.What's more,I'll write a card which is full of my wishes to her.I wish that she would keep young all her life. OK,that's all.Have you got other ideas?Look forward to your reply. Best wishes. 我有个问题你是高中基础的学生还是高考特训的,如果是特训的你应该好好看看笔记了.最多20分左右,有很多小错,自己仔细对照一下,拼写错误等等。
2006年09月12日 14点09分 2
level 6
不好意思是特训的,我一定一定好好看笔记去
2006年09月17日 02点09分 3
level 7
态度正确
2006年09月18日 01点09分 4
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